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In Ma Heid - - (In My Head)
Inside my head
Is like a bucket of frogs,
But it also happily contains
A three legged rabid wolverine,
Big Tony from the Bronx,
Wee Bessie, the one eyed,
Club footed, seven fingered,
Hook nosed, unwashed, stuttering
Lucky white heather seller from Alabama
Oh yeah, and a pink speckled duck
With one wing that can still occasionally fly.
But only in circles
Any counselling assistance
Or advice would be appreciated
As the problems in my head
Spill into my poetry
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Re. In Ma Heid - - (In My Head)
23rd Nov 2017 00:40am
the only advice I would give
is to never mind the slops
but just to think of your thoughts
as mops .. :)
is to never mind the slops
but just to think of your thoughts
as mops .. :)
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25th Nov 2017 5:02pm
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23rd Nov 2017 00:42am
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25th Nov 2017 5:03pm
Re. In Ma Heid - - (In My Head)
23rd Nov 2017 00:47am
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25th Nov 2017 5:04pm
Re. In Ma Heid - - (In My Head)
Anonymous
23rd Nov 2017 1:42am
You my friend are every piece of your poetry written by all those voices.
They are you and you are them and we all hear the voices that help us write.
Happy to know the whole lot of you.
Bear Hugs Brother
They are you and you are them and we all hear the voices that help us write.
Happy to know the whole lot of you.
Bear Hugs Brother

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Re: Re. In Ma Heid - - (In My Head)
25th Nov 2017 5:05pm
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Anonymous
25th Nov 2017 11:10pm
A legion of Scottish warriors is a force to be reckoned with!

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26th Nov 2017 1:55am
Re. In Ma Heid - - (In My Head)
Anonymous
23rd Nov 2017 2:48pm
Well, at least you know which areas to avoid while the duck is in flight. Just stay out of its circle to avoid the poo falling! Huge grinning hugs! 😊🤗🤗🤗

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Re: Re. In Ma Heid - - (In My Head)
25th Nov 2017 5:06pm
Re. In Ma Heid - - (In My Head)
O my--sooo many grins and giggles with this one!!!
What a motley crew inhabits your heid!! All those frogs jumping about, and Wee Bessie and Big Tony trying to avoid them.... while out-distancing that rabid wolverine! And ALL of them just managing to dodge that daffy duck! No wonder you are experiencing issues! (Hee! Hee! )
All i can offer, by way of advice, is that by permitting those problems to "spill into your poetry ', is truly beneficial--not only to yourself, as it must be ever so crowded in there, but more especially, to your readers...as this results in the uniquely exceptional pieces that have earned you deserved respect, and recognition! ( Please allow the overflow to continue--unchecked! :) )
Bunches of Big HUUUGGGSSSS of Hilarity headed straight for you!!
What a motley crew inhabits your heid!! All those frogs jumping about, and Wee Bessie and Big Tony trying to avoid them.... while out-distancing that rabid wolverine! And ALL of them just managing to dodge that daffy duck! No wonder you are experiencing issues! (Hee! Hee! )
All i can offer, by way of advice, is that by permitting those problems to "spill into your poetry ', is truly beneficial--not only to yourself, as it must be ever so crowded in there, but more especially, to your readers...as this results in the uniquely exceptional pieces that have earned you deserved respect, and recognition! ( Please allow the overflow to continue--unchecked! :) )
Bunches of Big HUUUGGGSSSS of Hilarity headed straight for you!!
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Re: Re. In Ma Heid - - (In My Head)
25th Nov 2017 5:08pm
I love causing grins, giggles and smiles - it can sometimes be like a zoo in Ma heid - but that's another poem :-)))
Big Hooooge Hugs :-)))
Big Hooooge Hugs :-)))
Re. In Ma Heid - - (In My Head)
23rd Nov 2017 7:29pm
What a lovely wee bit of lunacy :))) Watch out the frogs are hoppin outa the bucket!!
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Re: Re. In Ma Heid - - (In My Head)
25th Nov 2017 5:10pm
they can't get far I have eaten their legs - karma is a bitch (lol) :-))))))
love and Huggs teddy style :-))))
love and Huggs teddy style :-))))