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a thousand dreams
I’m born of a thousand dreams
left to little scenes
in a time of lions, in a time of wolves
the dark endures the light
born of pains at night
single moments left to caress
a dead sycamore , a crying bird
in a time of my virtue, in a time of my song
eight wands
pointed to flying sparrows
and a gate will open to thee
the end will last at the leaves of a tree
I’m born of a thousand dreams
in a time of war in a time of wound
marielle 2015
left to little scenes
in a time of lions, in a time of wolves
the dark endures the light
born of pains at night
single moments left to caress
a dead sycamore , a crying bird
in a time of my virtue, in a time of my song
eight wands
pointed to flying sparrows
and a gate will open to thee
the end will last at the leaves of a tree
I’m born of a thousand dreams
in a time of war in a time of wound
marielle 2015
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Re. a thousand dreams
16th Nov 2017 9:12pm
Embroided with a taste of worry. Born in time of war?. Yea, born of a thousand dream.
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Re: Re. a thousand dreams
16th Nov 2017 9:15pm
Re. a thousand dreams
16th Nov 2017 9:20pm
If i'm right,i mean the poet is a bit worried cos she's found herself in different field of life with varying faces. 'Time of Lions... Wolves'.
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Re. a thousand dreams
16th Nov 2017 9:21pm
If i'm right,i mean the poet is a bit worried cos she found herself in different field of life with varying phases. 'Time of Lions... Wolves'.
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Re: Re. a thousand dreams
17th Nov 2017 00:48am
Re. a thousand dreams
17th Nov 2017 4:19am
It seems you a bit of a storyteller inside you... n you're a bit lyrical :)
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Re. a thousand dreams
17th Nov 2017 2:24pm
this eloquently inked poem beautifully evokes the world soul
the wands...air ...ideation ...the # 8 ...the number of manifestation of the will
in your case the virtue to save ...you are beautiful!
the wands...air ...ideation ...the # 8 ...the number of manifestation of the will
in your case the virtue to save ...you are beautiful!
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Re: Re. a thousand dreams
17th Nov 2017 2:38pm
thank you so much! What a lovely compliment! This is what I was trying to convey , I am glad others are able to see my message.
Re. a thousand dreams
Anonymous
17th Nov 2017 11:42pm
Marielle.. really dig the way you tell a story.. great ink.. much respect..
Dave
Dave

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Re: Re. a thousand dreams
18th Nov 2017 5:38pm
Re. a thousand dreams
18th Nov 2017 2:17am
despite its darkness this is a beautiful write - I really enjoyed every word :-)))))
Excellent Ink :-)))
Excellent Ink :-)))
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Re: Re. a thousand dreams
18th Nov 2017 5:38pm
Re. a thousand dreams
19th Nov 2017 2:42pm
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19th Nov 2017 5:04pm
Re. a thousand dreams
11th Feb 2018 3:33pm
I have never seen a non erotica having been read so many times
lovely congrats from again
lovely congrats from again
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