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R.I.P.D
Death oh beautiful death why do you continue to escape me at every corner all I want is you yet you still refuse to me my owner. Death can't you see I'm way past my last breathe dnt u know I give in I refuse to fight I have nothing left
Why won't you just let me be at peace & rest truly just rest in ease. Death I know your not my friend nor my foe I pop pills I smoke & I drink just to let it all go. My light have dimmed I stand on the edge of of what's fucked up yet completely fine shit I'm so done I even snort a blurred line. Death fuck my life you're all that I need you're my true love/drug surpassed all the liquor crack dope & weed.
Why won't you just let me be at peace & rest truly just rest in ease. Death I know your not my friend nor my foe I pop pills I smoke & I drink just to let it all go. My light have dimmed I stand on the edge of of what's fucked up yet completely fine shit I'm so done I even snort a blurred line. Death fuck my life you're all that I need you're my true love/drug surpassed all the liquor crack dope & weed.
Published 3rd Nov 2017
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6th Nov 2017 9:07pm
A sorrowful plea unto Death. It pains my heart to see you crave the grave so desperately, but I hope you are achieved in your dreams.
The poem's rhyme was easy and together, but the flow was mocked by the run on sentences and disregard for line breaks. Not too bad all together.
Thanks for sharing :)
E.
The poem's rhyme was easy and together, but the flow was mocked by the run on sentences and disregard for line breaks. Not too bad all together.
Thanks for sharing :)
E.
