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-Let me undress your mind, instead of your clothes
-Let me kiss your thoughts, instead of your lips
-Let me make love to your brain, instead of your body
-Let me hold your pain, (unfinished)
-Let me kiss your thoughts, instead of your lips
-Let me make love to your brain, instead of your body
-Let me hold your pain, (unfinished)
Published 1st Nov 2017
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6th Nov 2017 9:11pm
Beautiful Insight. It's encouraging to see someone desire the unseen aspects of a lover. True beauty lies beneath the flesh and blood. Looking forward to the finished poem.
Great start, thanks for sharing :)
E.
Great start, thanks for sharing :)
E.
8th Nov 2017 3:13am
Thank you.
One day I'll finish it. I like that (unfinished) kind of rhymes though, but i wont leave it there. Just didn't want to force it.
One day I'll finish it. I like that (unfinished) kind of rhymes though, but i wont leave it there. Just didn't want to force it.
