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call them a tree huggers
back where i was born
roamed carefree
stood and still stands
a baobab tree
born somewhere back
in the sixteenth century
somehow it stands
amongst the ruins of a fort
not too far away
from an emperor's court
legend says the hollow
sheltered forty men
hasn't changed much
from what it did then
had the good fortune
spent time inside
from the entrance on its chest
a hole shaped cardioid
has this haunting beauty
an eerie peace and calm
a place so sublime
borne witness to the harm
takes not a wise soul
to appreciate it all
among the strongest of the ruins
standing mighty, tall
what the teenage group
appreciated then
cherish it they now
as middle life men
men with heavy hearts
and nowhere else to go
men being the men
scars they do not show
they unburden their soul
scream their hearts out
arms embracing trunk
they wail their troubles out
it listens and not speaks
to burdened hard men
not too different
from what it did back then
alive amongst the ruins
since sixteenth century
offering but solace
the baobab tree
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Re. call them a tree huggers
25th Oct 2017 6:39pm
I have a small sculpture about 4" tall of a Baobab Tree (African "Tree of Life") I purchased at the African cultural exhibit in Walt Disney World that is hand carved and imported from Africa. It is for our 2nd youngest g-son. I have it displayed on our fireplace mantel with an accent light that can be turned on to highlight it. I plan to give it to him when he becomes old enough to appreciate it.
I tell you this because this poem will now be placed on my RL for future reference to it's significance to the history of these trees.
Thank you so much for such a timely piece.
I tell you this because this poem will now be placed on my RL for future reference to it's significance to the history of these trees.
Thank you so much for such a timely piece.
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Re: Re. call them a tree huggers
25th Oct 2017 6:48pm
goodness T!
hard not to envy the gift..surely, surely
the lucky Boy will cherish
the tree
of life.
RL is humbling.
the tree
is not native to that place
its species is a Madagascan
and somehow its seed made its way
across the ocean
it is a spiritual experience
visiting
not just for the nostalgic reasons
peer's visit
and honor
is but humbling.
welcome is the peer
always
appreciated
immensely
hard not to envy the gift..surely, surely
the lucky Boy will cherish
the tree
of life.
RL is humbling.
the tree
is not native to that place
its species is a Madagascan
and somehow its seed made its way
across the ocean
it is a spiritual experience
visiting
not just for the nostalgic reasons
peer's visit
and honor
is but humbling.
welcome is the peer
always
appreciated
immensely
Re. call them a tree huggers
25th Oct 2017 8:59pm
I love the vivid imagery, I felt like I was sitting in that tree as someone told me it's storied history. Great poem.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
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Re: Re. call them a tree huggers
what more
greater reward
for a peer
to have such
an awesome review.
welcome
is the peer
affectionate
and the review
both
appreciated
immensely.
greater reward
for a peer
to have such
an awesome review.
welcome
is the peer
affectionate
and the review
both
appreciated
immensely.
Re. call them a tree huggers
25th Oct 2017 10:29pm
An epic piece of imagery ink C...I could see that ancient tree as I read each beautiful line.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. call them a tree huggers
Harry
to recieve such review
from you
is but sheer honor.
welcome
is the poet
and the review
both
appreciated
immensely
to recieve such review
from you
is but sheer honor.
welcome
is the poet
and the review
both
appreciated
immensely
Re. call them a tree huggers
Anonymous
26th Oct 2017 00:04am
A scene beautifully painted. Loved this one :)
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Re: Re. call them a tree huggers
26th Oct 2017 10:46am
welcome
is the peer
and the review.
yes
a beautiful scene
painted itself
on memories
of all visitors.
appreciate
the visit
the review
deeply.
is the peer
and the review.
yes
a beautiful scene
painted itself
on memories
of all visitors.
appreciate
the visit
the review
deeply.
Re. call them a tree huggers
26th Oct 2017 00:38am
"men with heavy hearts
and nowhere else to go
men being the men
scars they do not show "
I used to tell all my secrets to my favorite tree
this write brought back fond memories..
love Crim
and nowhere else to go
men being the men
scars they do not show "
I used to tell all my secrets to my favorite tree
this write brought back fond memories..
love Crim
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Re: Re. call them a tree huggers
well
some elders
are listeners unmatched
and solace
is all they return
welcome
the peer admired
appreciated
the visit
the review
immensely
some elders
are listeners unmatched
and solace
is all they return
welcome
the peer admired
appreciated
the visit
the review
immensely
Anonymous
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27th Oct 2017 4:01am
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Re: Re. call them a tree huggers
27th Oct 2017 1:00pm
well
an Artist
respected
admired
honoring
a memory
is but
a joy to behold.
yes they stand
strong
your poetic
review
is something to savor
dear Friend.
appreciate
immensely
the visit
the feedback
an Artist
respected
admired
honoring
a memory
is but
a joy to behold.
yes they stand
strong
your poetic
review
is something to savor
dear Friend.
appreciate
immensely
the visit
the feedback
Re. call them a tree huggers
27th Oct 2017 11:26am
Lucky are those who have experienced even a moment Being within the totality of Being... Lucky are you who had, and you allowed such moment(s) to stay with you...
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Re: Re. call them a tree huggers
27th Oct 2017 12:57pm
welcome
dear poet honored.
yes,
lucky
in all its meaning
and i admire
your insight.
you've nailed it- Being!!
well..the moments
are etched in memories
fond.
appreciate immensely
you
honoring the memory!
dear poet honored.
yes,
lucky
in all its meaning
and i admire
your insight.
you've nailed it- Being!!
well..the moments
are etched in memories
fond.
appreciate immensely
you
honoring the memory!
Re. call them a tree huggers
27th Oct 2017 11:54am
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27th Oct 2017 12:32pm
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27th Oct 2017 12:37pm
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27th Oct 2017 12:42pm
Re. call them a tree huggers
27th Oct 2017 12:42pm
trees are so very stoic
& wise in there own way
you've honored them
& your beloved Bobab tree
with this write..
~Raven
& wise in there own way
you've honored them
& your beloved Bobab tree
with this write..
~Raven
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Re: Re. call them a tree huggers
27th Oct 2017 1:08pm
well
i wish could
truly honor
that Being!
this ink
a mere tribute.
yes
they are wise
beyond human words.
welcome
dear poet.
appreciate
immensely
the visit
the review.
i wish could
truly honor
that Being!
this ink
a mere tribute.
yes
they are wise
beyond human words.
welcome
dear poet.
appreciate
immensely
the visit
the review.
Re. call them a tree huggers
16th Nov 2017 7:58pm
My my, what a wonderful write. Truly loved the flow of this and where it took me.
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Re: Re. call them a tree huggers
19th Nov 2017 00:15am
welcome
is the poet admired
and the review affectionate.
honor is
the scribbler's.
for there is no
greater joy
than a peer enjoy
the work of another one.
is the poet admired
and the review affectionate.
honor is
the scribbler's.
for there is no
greater joy
than a peer enjoy
the work of another one.