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Kaze ga kieta
Kyo
Kaze no uta wo
Chiisaku iimashita.
Anata mo
Nani mo ienai kedo
Watashi tokoro kara
Kieta.
--
The wind's song
Was sung quietly today
And you, too,
Though without saying a word
Left me
Where I stood.
Kaze no uta wo
Chiisaku iimashita.
Anata mo
Nani mo ienai kedo
Watashi tokoro kara
Kieta.
--
The wind's song
Was sung quietly today
And you, too,
Though without saying a word
Left me
Where I stood.
Published 23rd Oct 2017
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23rd Oct 2017 3:29pm
Nice peaceful poem
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Sometimes we only the weill of the wind.
Sometimes the wind does not want to blow us away.
Listen to the wind, it talks. ... Listen to the breeze, it knows.
... ... ...
...
Sometimes we only the weill of the wind.
Sometimes the wind does not want to blow us away.
Listen to the wind, it talks. ... Listen to the breeze, it knows.
... ... ...
23rd Oct 2017 4:01pm
12th Dec 2017 2:05pm
Good writing EmptyTree. i love the Japanese, the wind not saying a word.
well penned, it left me with the feeling like someone whispered to me.
well penned, it left me with the feeling like someone whispered to me.
25th May 2018 9:24am
Thank you. Hopefully I'll have enough inspiration to write more Japanese ones.
