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The Fall
An autumn evening walk
Hearing the crinkling beneath my feet
Of the fallen leaves shattering
Fallen like my heart in defeat
Hearing the crinkling beneath my feet
Of the fallen leaves shattering
Fallen like my heart in defeat
Published 15th Sep 2011
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15th Sep 2011 10:46am
15th Sep 2011 11:12pm
Thanks Indie, every now and then I manage to say something in less than a thousand words. Blazing clarity... I like that description!
15th Sep 2011 8:03pm
15th Sep 2011 11:52pm
