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Step
Watching my step...
Not much movement...
Some accumulation of guilt...
And the toes, oh, the toes!...
If not for the toes,
it would, surely, be a waste of time...
Not much movement...
Some accumulation of guilt...
And the toes, oh, the toes!...
If not for the toes,
it would, surely, be a waste of time...
Published 22nd Oct 2017
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22nd Oct 2017 2:43pm
22nd Oct 2017 3:23pm
23rd Oct 2017 6:49pm
Love this short piece telling some messages. I guess it is describing a kid learning how to walk. Maybe I have guesssed wrong. Anyway, I love it.
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
23rd Oct 2017 7:14pm
Thank you, RoseJasmine! (There is no right way to read it. Your reading is as good and as unique as any!)
