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Re. Don't Look Back
21st Oct 2017 5:19am
Heartbreaking Grace... I realize it was written for the comp but it seems much too real to be just a comp entry. Very powerful write with a deep sense of loss!
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Re: Re. Don't Look Back
21st Oct 2017 12:18pm
There is always a few strains of truth in fiction. Thank you Poetryman for reading me as always. I loved your entry too. It was so You.
Re. Don't Look Back
Anonymous
21st Oct 2017 11:37am
Amazing honesty. Brutally deep. I won't look back.
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Re: Re. Don't Look Back
21st Oct 2017 12:19pm
Re. Don't Look Back
21st Oct 2017 1:57pm
it takes a mighty heart to let go
it even takes a mightier heart to move on without looking back
very poignant Grace.
it even takes a mightier heart to move on without looking back
very poignant Grace.
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Re: Re. Don't Look Back
22nd Oct 2017 6:20am
indeed...strength doesn't mean hardness of heart though:) thanks so much Oxy for reading me.
Re. Don't Look Back
21st Oct 2017 7:54pm
Letting go is hard to do as is the temptation to look back with second guess after guess. The past can be a trap, seems to me. It sounds like you made quite a sacrifice, so the parting is all the harder. This is fine work Grace and I love the layout.
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Re: Re. Don't Look Back
22nd Oct 2017 6:24am
Yes it was very difficult, and now I wish I never did:) as you know, sacrifices are not seen by others as fair... thank you Crowfly for reading me as always.
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3rd Nov 2017 5:39pm
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