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a deities beloved
i was left trembling
in the light
of your poetic glory
that strips me down
to nothing
all my barriers broken
a little girl
standing in a Goddess's light
i have to advert my gaze
or be burned to the ground
you wield the power
to build up or bring low
with the words
you string together so effortlessly
with a hypnotic sway of your hips
you mesmerize me
i want to lose myself in the depths
of the magic you spill
from god kissed lips
wrought from beauty & pain
you conjure words
from a lost world
& bring to memory
the days in the sun
where there was a you & i
when you speak
the ancients are heard
deities that whisper
to me in my sleep
uttering forgotten truths
& i write them
for you
to you
so you would know
who you are in this universe
in all universes
my beloved
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 10th Oct 2017
| Edited 12th Oct 2017
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Anonymous
10th Oct 2017 9:46pm
To be the divinity in someone's universe is an intoxicating thing. Immortalized in word and in poetry...such a beautiful gift you bestow upon your beloved. Breathtaking poetry, my lovely friend. I do so love you
12th Oct 2017 1:34am
thank you graciously lovely one a deity uses my love of her to channel his own love for her.. love you lady.. Crim
Anonymous
10th Oct 2017 10:03pm
What’s beautifully poetic ode !
12th Oct 2017 1:34am
Anonymous
10th Oct 2017 10:57pm
The ladies in this site leave me breathless...
12th Oct 2017 1:35am
11th Oct 2017 2:21am
Crim you make a man wish he was your deity. Just your words make me hunger for the chance to be worshipped. You humble me.
Thank you for the write.
Thank you for the write.
12th Oct 2017 1:37am
aw thank you dearest Wolfe blushes you honor me.. giggles a deity in the flesh could be sexy ;) love Crim
11th Oct 2017 4:28am
12th Oct 2017 1:37am
thank you graciously for such a beautiful comment gifting me smiles :) love Crimsin
11th Oct 2017 9:55pm
12th Oct 2017 1:38am
Anonymous
12th Oct 2017 1:45am
My love...again you leave me speechless with such poetic beauty which conveys depths I myself am unable to...I am deeply humbled my love, you warm my soul and blanket me everyday with your love and I would be incomplete without it...I will cherish this always, as I do each write you have graciously honored me with and I will forever be cherishing you...
I love you madly, deeply for eternity
yours always & forever
xoxooxoxxoxo Taryn
I love you madly, deeply for eternity
yours always & forever
xoxooxoxxoxo Taryn
12th Oct 2017 1:47am
thank you my love you inspire so much love & passion from me.. as well as a deity who seems to be taken with you & uses my shared love for you to channel his thoughts through me.. I am so overjoyed to be a part of your life.. I love you always & forever.. love Brenda
