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written on the stars
i faltered & fell
in the land of the dead
your words like warriors
came & lifted me
from where i lie
they carried me away
to a magical world
where my wounds were balmed
& my eyes gently salved
i turned to see
the many moons
smiling down on me
as gentle winds
sang psalms
to my weary soul
the denizens here
wear great robes
wove from the wisdom
they garnered in life
poetry their native tongue
they write on the stars
& it comes into being
brought to life
by their shimmering pneuma
sun kissed thoughts
sent into the ether
a message to those
who stumble in the dark
spun from the celestial
with light shining from their verse
they lead the way home
i was lost among the dead
& am found healed
in their words
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Re. written on the stars
Anonymous
10th Oct 2017 7:40pm
We stumble and it's so hard to rise sometimes. It takes everything we have just to lift our heads. My beautiful one, I will always keep my hand out to steady you. This is a gorgeous and calming poem filled with so much beauty. I will be keeping this one close and cherishing your words. I do so love you, my beautiful lady
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Re: Re. written on the stars
10th Oct 2017 7:42pm
thank you lovely one your gentle words of hope soothed me today.. bringing me peace.. you have a beautiful & shimmering soul.. I love you beautiful.. love Crim
Re. written on the stars
10th Oct 2017 8:38pm
Crim... this is absolutely beautiful and stunning. It just flows well together. A great piece. I’m in awe.
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10th Oct 2017 8:57pm
Re. written on the stars
10th Oct 2017 11:36pm
Crim, they just keep coming. This is such a lovely tribute. Your words flow so smoothly. I am so honored to be counted amongst those this poem was written for, if that is not too presumptuous. You have definitely put a smile on my face.
Thank you for the write.
Thank you for the write.
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Re: Re. written on the stars
12th Oct 2017 1:23am
thank you dearest Wolfe your words do the light the way dear poet.. I'm so happy to given you smiles :) love Crim
Re. written on the stars
11th Oct 2017 1:45am
beautiful - I would be proud to be part of that world - it sounds so much better than this one
Excellent write :-) Big Massive Hugs :-)
Excellent write :-) Big Massive Hugs :-)
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Re: Re. written on the stars
12th Oct 2017 1:25am
thank you dearest David you are a part of this world dearest poet you are one the people that writes poems on the stars that light my way.. love & hugs Brenda
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12th Oct 2017 1:35am
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Anonymous
11th Oct 2017 2:46am
My love, so many times words have the power to heal us...I find it to be an amazing encounter...your words have always taken me to places I long to be and can never describe...you have on so many occasions taken this girl, broken beyond and pieced me back together more times than I can even count at this point...the stars and those beyond them may heal you but know you have the same power....
I love you fiercely, deeply
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Taryn
I love you fiercely, deeply
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Taryn
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Re: Re. written on the stars
12th Oct 2017 1:26am
thank you my love yes your words have lit the darkness for me so many times.. I am so happy I do the same.. I love you passionately.. love Brenda
Re. written on the stars
11th Oct 2017 3:27pm
up-beat.
yes.
inspirational.
indeed.
expression
deep-ly effective.
ink
amazing.
yes.
inspirational.
indeed.
expression
deep-ly effective.
ink
amazing.
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12th Oct 2017 1:27am
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11th Oct 2017 8:32pm
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12th Oct 2017 1:28am
thank you dearest warrior soul indeed it is.. so grateful to all of you poets for lighting the way.. love Brenda
Re. written on the stars
11th Oct 2017 10:19pm
The light of words can be our guide. My favorite lines:
sun kissed thoughts
sent into the ether
a message to those
who stumble in the dark
I've been doing some stumbling myself of late so this is a comfort. Thank you Lady Crim. I'll keep gazing upward...
sun kissed thoughts
sent into the ether
a message to those
who stumble in the dark
I've been doing some stumbling myself of late so this is a comfort. Thank you Lady Crim. I'll keep gazing upward...
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Re: Re. written on the stars
12th Oct 2017 1:29am
thank you dearest Sir Crow i'm happy to lend comfort whenever I can..sorry to hear of your troubles dear friend.. love & hugs Crim
Re. written on the stars
13th Oct 2017 12:53pm
Lovely crim, your verses
continue to leave me in awe <3
I read your words
as though from ancient tongue
and am enchanted...
“they carried me away
to a magical world
where my wounds were balmed
& my eyes gently salved”
I am healed <3
continue to leave me in awe <3
I read your words
as though from ancient tongue
and am enchanted...
“they carried me away
to a magical world
where my wounds were balmed
& my eyes gently salved”
I am healed <3
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Re: Re. written on the stars
17th Oct 2017 8:16pm
thank you beautiful Nightbird most graciously I am smiling wide from your comment you gift me such kindness :) to a place we are both healed me in your magic & you in mine.. love & passionate hugs.. Brenda
Re. written on the stars
Anonymous
14th Oct 2017 7:22pm
Balm for hearts needs merely lies within your words.
Darling lovely
Darling lovely
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17th Oct 2017 8:17pm
thank you graciously beautiful poetess you are also a balm on a weary day.. love Crim