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Treasures Within Life's Journey
Pitch to me your wonders
that I may catch your gifts
I promise they may slumber
and never set adrift
Spring's sweet rains and Summer's greens
Autumn's colors red
Winter's white, a blanket soft
residing in my head
Oh send with me I beg you please
from the very start
for travels aren't as lonesome
when they're within my heart
Do not forget the ocean's blue
shared with the sky above
and flowers with their many hues
the sight of which I love
And do not leave behind
gentle clouds in flight
or brightness of the stars above
the beauty in my nights
Nor the songs that birds do sing
from the stoutest trees
and leave not out the butterflies,
small animals and bees
For without these treasured gifts
I fear a tiresome road
'till finally I will rest in peace
relieved of heavy loads
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Re. Treasures Within Life's Journey
Anonymous
9th Oct 2017 5:53am
So beautiful !
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9th Oct 2017 3:58pm
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Anonymous
9th Oct 2017 5:30pm
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Re: Re. Treasures Within Life's Journey
Thank You, your sentiment warms my heart.
Have missed your presence of late.
Have missed your presence of late.
Re. Treasures Within Life's Journey
9th Oct 2017 3:54pm
Indeed.
treasure.
The expression.
calming. soothing.
the soul.
Poet is obervationist stute.
treasure.
The expression.
calming. soothing.
the soul.
Poet is obervationist stute.
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Re: Re. Treasures Within Life's Journey
9th Oct 2017 4:13pm
Speaking only on the joys of life I have thus far been gifted with.
Thank you for the warming words.
Thank you for the warming words.
Re. Treasures Within Life's Journey
9th Oct 2017 6:19pm
dearest poetess my heart is heavy
but this poem lit up my day
such a beautiful soul you have
to write so gloriously..
a true gift you posess..
~Raven
but this poem lit up my day
such a beautiful soul you have
to write so gloriously..
a true gift you posess..
~Raven
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Re: Re. Treasures Within Life's Journey
9th Oct 2017 7:14pm
Raven, I am relieved to hear from you. Though I had mentioned I would not be here yesterday, plans changed and I was able to enjoy a prolonged visit yet saddened, for I found no writes posted by you and feared something may have happened. I truly am interested in your wellbeing and look each day possible for a write from you telling us how you are copping. Thank you for the wonderful comment and RL, for it means much to me that you enjoyed it.
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9th Oct 2017 7:18pm
the wind was gushing somewhat fiercely yesterday & my wifi was down dearest poetess I apologize for my absence I will fight to be here as it my haven.. thank you deeply for all the love & light you show in action as well as poetry.. ~Raven
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9th Oct 2017 7:42pm
Re. Treasures Within Life's Journey
10th Oct 2017 00:47am
I am in awe with this beauty of such tenderness, that warms my heart in these words you write! Very gentle and sweet.. and such skills...truly admirable!
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10th Oct 2017 1:47am
You have gifted me with wonderful words and I thank you so much. I hope you are finding the site to your liking.
Re. Treasures Within Life's Journey
10th Oct 2017 2:47am
This poem is beautiful, words cannot even describe how beautiful it is. You are indeed talented.
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Your comment warms greatly and is appreciated very much.
As you graze upon these pages feeding needs within your heart, you will find many others that are much better and a multitude of various delights just awaiting your discovery.
Journey safe fellow traveler, be well and welcome to the Deep Under.....
As you graze upon these pages feeding needs within your heart, you will find many others that are much better and a multitude of various delights just awaiting your discovery.
Journey safe fellow traveler, be well and welcome to the Deep Under.....
Re. Treasures Within Life's Journey
10th Oct 2017 5:25pm
dearest Amorous One
I was completely transported by your poem
the beautiful imagery came alive in my mind & soul
bringing such a sweet sense of serenity..
love Crim
I was completely transported by your poem
the beautiful imagery came alive in my mind & soul
bringing such a sweet sense of serenity..
love Crim
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Crim, I am so glad it brought you a small feeling of peace. We all need that as we deal with life's hardships and the seemingly daily news of sad happenings from around the world. I am truly in awe of nature and the profound affect it can have if one just stops long enough to appreciate it.
Thank you for the warm riches you have bestowed upon me with your words.
Love my friend, Teri
Thank you for the warm riches you have bestowed upon me with your words.
Love my friend, Teri
Re. Treasures Within Life's Journey
11th Dec 2017 11:49pm
A classical beauty. I would be a miserable man bereft of what you describe. Makes the the plight of a prisoner all the more poignant.
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12th Dec 2017 5:22pm
One can be locked away in many ways, a prisoner in a multitude of fashions, but the freedom of the mind can never be held captive until all hope or desire is lost as well.
Is not the mind where the spirit of the soul draws it's strength from? If one truly believes in themselves then they remain free regardless of where the body resides.
If you have drawn any strength or received any comfort from this poem then I am very thankful it made it's way to you.
I offered the poem because it truly reflects my feelings as I journey through this space in time, perhaps never to pass this way again.
Thank you for validating my thoughts.
AT
Is not the mind where the spirit of the soul draws it's strength from? If one truly believes in themselves then they remain free regardless of where the body resides.
If you have drawn any strength or received any comfort from this poem then I am very thankful it made it's way to you.
I offered the poem because it truly reflects my feelings as I journey through this space in time, perhaps never to pass this way again.
Thank you for validating my thoughts.
AT
Re: Re. Treasures Within Life's Journey
12th Dec 2017 8:31pm
That reminds me of one of my favorite songs growing up,"We May Never Pass This Way Again" by Seals and Crofts.
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