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A 'Call to Harms...'
This...
Is exactly the way it starts
those nagging voices,
choking
out the light...
Haggard shadows,
stagger ominously,
a blood soaked
trail...
along thoughts might...
He cries futile promises
to the angels...
beg mercy,
lest it falls silent...
alarm
As so it goes, this path
to darkly bitter destruction
battering it's rancid reign
to do all in it's wake
ultimate harm...
*note: A piece I wrote awhile back
decided to post, because it's that
time of year lol...
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Re. A 'Call to Harms...'
6th Oct 2017 6:10pm
dearest poet I can deeply relate
to those nagging voices choking out the light..
profound write..
~Raven
to those nagging voices choking out the light..
profound write..
~Raven
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Re: Re. A 'Call to Harms...'
6th Oct 2017 10:15pm
This wasn't really much about me, it was done as a scary story for Halloween years ago...just never posted it. But I do thank you kindly! :)
Re. A 'Call to Harms...'
6th Oct 2017 6:11pm
Poe this write chilled me to the bone
some deep insight in this ominous ink..
love Crimsin
some deep insight in this ominous ink..
love Crimsin
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Re: Re. A 'Call to Harms...'
6th Oct 2017 10:17pm
Sweet Crim, this was the piece I was referring to...on ur page... thank you always for your support...truly appreciate it...
Re: Re. A 'Call to Harms...'
6th Oct 2017 10:22pm
yes I can see the similarities so chilling it's a fantastically haunting write dear friend.. love Crim
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Re: Re. A 'Call to Harms...'
6th Oct 2017 11:12pm
Re. A 'Call to Harms...'
1st read: Duh! (didn't see author's note)
2nd read: WTF (still did not see note)
3rd read: Hmmm! (finally saw note)
4th thru 6th: Yea, maybe
7th: Yes, I love it. Fall turning to winter.
Final thought: Hope I didn't insult the poet, but I love my interpretation, even if I'm confined to the corner with my dunce cap for an hour.
Good poetry speaks to many on different levels. This one screams.
AT
2nd read: WTF (still did not see note)
3rd read: Hmmm! (finally saw note)
4th thru 6th: Yea, maybe
7th: Yes, I love it. Fall turning to winter.
Final thought: Hope I didn't insult the poet, but I love my interpretation, even if I'm confined to the corner with my dunce cap for an hour.
Good poetry speaks to many on different levels. This one screams.
AT
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Re: Re. A 'Call to Harms...'
7th Oct 2017 4:55am
Didn't insult at all, did make me laugh missing the note n whatnot lol Thank you sweetie, always for the support :)
Re. A 'Call to Harms...'
6th Oct 2017 8:27pm
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Re. A 'Call to Harms...'
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Re: Re. A 'Call to Harms...'
8th Oct 2017 00:54am
Dang it, I ran out of treats! But I know some cool card tricks!? lol...thank you my dear,I'm grateful as always for your support ... :)
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Re: Re. A 'Call to Harms...'
8th Oct 2017 00:56am
Such as the seasons go right?...big thanks for the thought-full visit n the RL add...I'm humbled. :)
Re. A 'Call to Harms...'
Anonymous
8th Oct 2017 9:30pm
no words but deeply felt

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Re: Re. A 'Call to Harms...'
8th Oct 2017 9:45pm
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9th Oct 2017 11:16pm
Re. A 'Call to Harms...'
11th Oct 2017 00:51am
Enjoyed reading this. I like the way you use your words. Also, I like the witty title of this piece.
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Re: Re. A 'Call to Harms...'
11th Oct 2017 00:58am
Thank you, I truly appreciate that n your time...when u post ink, I will drop by to check u out. :)