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Obstruction
Cascading glacial stares
Pave faces
& graceless stuffy airs
Disjointed intersections loom
Imposing
Prepatent
Poised to pounce & prate
Congenial pirates are we all
Seeking to play our pieces
To lay our boasting bricks
Before the mortar petrifies
Pave faces
& graceless stuffy airs
Disjointed intersections loom
Imposing
Prepatent
Poised to pounce & prate
Congenial pirates are we all
Seeking to play our pieces
To lay our boasting bricks
Before the mortar petrifies
Published 1st Oct 2017
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1st Oct 2017 7:28pm
I'd love to know how you come up with these :-) I am always blown away by your vocabulary and the artistic way you paint with words - this is beautiful - :-)
1st Oct 2017 7:57pm
You're so sweet, thank you :) This was inspired by listening to a clique of moms during school pick up. They incessantly talked over each other, and tried one-upping everyone. It was pretty gross honestly 😆
8th Oct 2017 8:31pm
I will have to second David's thoughts here! I grow ever-more curious about the inspirations for your vastly varied vocabulary :) You are a delight to read AtoMikbomb!
1st Oct 2017 7:58pm
1st Oct 2017 9:15pm
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2nd Oct 2017 7:38am
2nd Oct 2017 1:22pm
Love the last two lines it hit a cord with me
Your words sway in my mind
I love reading ever line 😊
Your words sway in my mind
I love reading ever line 😊
2nd Oct 2017 9:35pm
Agree with dear Mr. EpicUtester69, the ending of this is awesome ... bravo!
2nd Oct 2017 9:42pm
