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Stygian reflections
To keep close that which hurts us,
the suffering, the imperfection, the adversity,
makes us terribly human.
Inside out, I sit by the moon,
watching a lonely candle cast placid ghosts
on an empty page and a faded photograph,
strung out on sorrow's proclivities.
Fall soft my tears,
as I search for his silhouette in a livid blue rain.
Break quiet my heart,
I still dance beneath a mourning sky.
In a place where inane goodbyes
hold no form,
I chase my rainbows in the dark.
(Art by Steve de la Mare)
the suffering, the imperfection, the adversity,
makes us terribly human.
Inside out, I sit by the moon,
watching a lonely candle cast placid ghosts
on an empty page and a faded photograph,
strung out on sorrow's proclivities.
Fall soft my tears,
as I search for his silhouette in a livid blue rain.
Break quiet my heart,
I still dance beneath a mourning sky.
In a place where inane goodbyes
hold no form,
I chase my rainbows in the dark.
(Art by Steve de la Mare)
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27th Sep 2017 8:31am
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27th Sep 2017 2:10pm
Beautifully written...there is a sense of sendness running through with a new found freedom in the rain
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28th Sep 2017 5:07am
The rain, yes, there's nothing like a cleansing rain. Thanks so much, Tim, it's nice hear your thoughts...
Re. Stygian reflections
28th Sep 2017 00:35am
The gentle and not overstated melancholia make for a peaceful and poignant read.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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28th Sep 2017 2:54am
I love that last line, the irony of it, it reminds me of that phrase you coined, ' noire rainbows ' in another poem which I found very cool even scientifically...
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28th Sep 2017 5:46am
Those rainbows, I wonder what color the might be in the dark. Perhaps scientifically, they would be as black as the sky. An interesting thought for sure. I really appreciate the thought you put into your comments, Poet, means alot. Thank you...
Re. Stygian reflections
28th Sep 2017 8:41am
Poised between the passion and pain this poetry has found its quiet place
Fine write indeed
Fine write indeed
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18th Nov 2017 8:14am
'fall soft my tears, break quiet my heart';
for those of us in the dark...
for those of us in the dark...
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