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nocte amans
Clouds adorn her in whisps of finery, maiden's veils.
And her embellishments,
all stardust and impossibility.
At the fall of sweeping darkness, she waits.
Fortuity wraps great mountains
with moribund nocte,
laying upon vast horizons
his robes of Stygian desire.
He besets her heart, her every intrigue,
but never to stay,
slipping quietly away to that place
she cannot follow.
If moon and night could never embrace,
only the stars would remain.
(Artwork unknown)
And her embellishments,
all stardust and impossibility.
At the fall of sweeping darkness, she waits.
Fortuity wraps great mountains
with moribund nocte,
laying upon vast horizons
his robes of Stygian desire.
He besets her heart, her every intrigue,
but never to stay,
slipping quietly away to that place
she cannot follow.
If moon and night could never embrace,
only the stars would remain.
(Artwork unknown)
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Re. nocte amans
4th Oct 2017 5:35am
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4th Oct 2017 5:40am
Thank you, Silent_One, glad you could enjoy. I appreciate the visit and kind words...
Re. nocte amans
4th Oct 2017 1:25pm
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7th Oct 2017 7:50pm
Those quiet places; they always seem to linger, don't they? Thank you for the beautiful comment, Ahavati...
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Anonymous
4th Oct 2017 3:04pm
"that place she cannot follow..." Therein lies the beauty and the longing in this piece. So lovely
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7th Oct 2017 7:53pm
Longing and reflection, and as Ahavati has said above, perhaps even quiet acceptance. Thank you for the kind visit...
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4th Oct 2017 3:15pm
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Re. nocte amans
5th Oct 2017 2:32am
lovely Kasai a very beautiful write
that leaves me in awe
what a beauty of longing & desire..
love Crim
that leaves me in awe
what a beauty of longing & desire..
love Crim
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Re: Re. nocte amans
7th Oct 2017 7:59pm
Longing and desire, yes. A beautiful, yet lonely place. We've all been there at least once, I'm sure. Thank you, talented one, for a most lovely comment...
Re. nocte amans
5th Oct 2017 3:16am
I am in awe of that how you make a normal situation become sentimenal poetry, such beautiful and meloncholy....love this a lot....
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Re: Re. nocte amans
7th Oct 2017 8:02pm
So very kind of you, RoseJasmine, I'm glad you could enjoy it with me and I truly appreciate your thoughts and kind words...
Re. nocte amans
18th Nov 2017 8:04pm
there is poetry in every intrigue;
intrigue in every night when the moon is halo'd by stars.
beautiful, Kas...
intrigue in every night when the moon is halo'd by stars.
beautiful, Kas...
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19th Nov 2017 6:32am
Yes, John, there really is.
Every single one.
And thank you so much for those beautiful words of yours.
I've missed them...
Every single one.
And thank you so much for those beautiful words of yours.
I've missed them...