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The Only Way Home
If there should come a moment
that you feel like quitting
( such as that time you did
for lack of encouragement
from those you loved )
This round
You don't give up
You absorb the kick
and remember
why you are doing this
And for who
Weeks may pass, months
you may hear from no one
Invest in more sketch paper
don't lay that pencil down
Some people will come along
piggy back for what they can gain
Erase them and seek those
with genuine Spirits
Others will belittle you
because they can't understand
your multidimensions
Don't keep quiet. . .
Show them why it matters
how hard you stand behind it
If you are tired and hungry
drink a cup of coffee
sharpen pencils for dinner
But press on; Go
There will be times you are sick
but people need you
so you show up regardless
Remember when your father died
and you felt like folding it all in
But you remembered what he stood for
and held that space to stand
When you feel hopeless
or that you don't matter again
be grateful that you've learned
to create fire in the darkness
When you feel worthless
or in no place to assist others
realize you've been there before
and can help guide them through
There may be times
You feel like a joke;
a fool of futile attempts
Show them your goal
is no laughing matter
Nor are the animals
depending on you
If you want to get to where you're going
You go and go
and you go
realizing there is no end to it all
Because the goal is to GO
You go despite circumstance
You go despite not feeling Loved
You go despite lack of Faith
You go because it's what feels right
beneath everyone else's judgment
Under your own misgivings
the Next Thing beats Truth
across its stretched skin of drum
guiding You out of the jungle
Now ask me "How?"
when nothing's going right
I'll tell You:
Because deep down you know the way
and You're still trying to go by asking me
So. . .GO
Don't give up
this round
Going is the Goal;
the only way Home
~
that you feel like quitting
( such as that time you did
for lack of encouragement
from those you loved )
This round
You don't give up
You absorb the kick
and remember
why you are doing this
And for who
Weeks may pass, months
you may hear from no one
Invest in more sketch paper
don't lay that pencil down
Some people will come along
piggy back for what they can gain
Erase them and seek those
with genuine Spirits
Others will belittle you
because they can't understand
your multidimensions
Don't keep quiet. . .
Show them why it matters
how hard you stand behind it
If you are tired and hungry
drink a cup of coffee
sharpen pencils for dinner
But press on; Go
There will be times you are sick
but people need you
so you show up regardless
Remember when your father died
and you felt like folding it all in
But you remembered what he stood for
and held that space to stand
When you feel hopeless
or that you don't matter again
be grateful that you've learned
to create fire in the darkness
When you feel worthless
or in no place to assist others
realize you've been there before
and can help guide them through
There may be times
You feel like a joke;
a fool of futile attempts
Show them your goal
is no laughing matter
Nor are the animals
depending on you
If you want to get to where you're going
You go and go
and you go
realizing there is no end to it all
Because the goal is to GO
You go despite circumstance
You go despite not feeling Loved
You go despite lack of Faith
You go because it's what feels right
beneath everyone else's judgment
Under your own misgivings
the Next Thing beats Truth
across its stretched skin of drum
guiding You out of the jungle
Now ask me "How?"
when nothing's going right
I'll tell You:
Because deep down you know the way
and You're still trying to go by asking me
So. . .GO
Don't give up
this round
Going is the Goal;
the only way Home
~
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Re. The Only Way Home
Ahavati... I absolutely love this. This packs a punch and has a lot of truth. It's something we all need to hear. I love the message.
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17th Sep 2017 2:49am
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17th Sep 2017 2:50am
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sometimes giving up looks attractive ..
I know it's wrong,
but I quite fancy it .. :)
I know it's wrong,
but I quite fancy it .. :)
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17th Sep 2017 12:31pm
Sometimes it does seem more appealing than carrying on. That's true; however, the only menu choice is regret.
Re. The Only Way Home
17th Sep 2017 6:48am
'The goal is to go,' I like that,
a very wise bit of advice.
Thanks for sharing...
a very wise bit of advice.
Thanks for sharing...
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17th Sep 2017 12:32pm
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17th Sep 2017 9:59am
Ok I'll go, but daggit I wanted to stay!! But Yea okie...I will gooooooo...!! Lol
But before I leave, let me just say...you rock like 'poprocks' my dearest!! Excellently inspiring ink!!!
But before I leave, let me just say...you rock like 'poprocks' my dearest!! Excellently inspiring ink!!!
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LOL! From Starbursts to Poprocks! Candy is getting a run for it's money! Thanks you, PoetikOne! That's sweet ( pun intended )!
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17th Sep 2017 1:09pm
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Anonymous
17th Sep 2017 2:44pm
the essence of poem very positive and forward looking- excellent!
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17th Sep 2017 11:21pm
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17th Sep 2017 3:35pm
Because it's regretful if you choose any other way than that of being loved & loving in return
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17th Sep 2017 11:22pm
Re. The Only Way Home
17th Sep 2017 7:43pm
this is powerful and beautifully written - the construction is, as always, flawless but there are people who are not brave enough to make hard choices - I am one - sadly motivation does not work I am immune :-(
thanks for sharing, I could feel a bit of a stirring :-)
thanks for sharing, I could feel a bit of a stirring :-)
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17th Sep 2017 11:24pm
Thank you, David. 🌞 You just haven't met the right motivator yet. But I have no about you will because your heart is gold.
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Anonymous
18th Sep 2017 1:10am
Still struggling for words to express my gratitude for having you in my corner.
💜
💜
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18th Sep 2017 2:07am
I can't imagine not ever being in your corner.💜 Thank you for your guidance and the RL Honor. 💕
Re. The Only Way Home
18th Sep 2017 3:32am
It's very inspiring, especially to those swimming upstream to be creative and visionary as many of the great writers did, against the downward flow of commonality, i.e. groupthink....
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18th Sep 2017 12:39pm
Re. The Only Way Home
18th Sep 2017 8:12pm
I liked the poem a lot; for its clean form that made for a smooth reading. For its clarity and its message that the important thing is the "go", the "road", the "process", the "journey", the "whatever you call it" and not the goal... But, reaching the goal, is, ocassionally, important as well, because only then one understands fully that the reached destination is not exactly (usually, much less than) what one expected, but the adventure was far more rewarding.
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19th Sep 2017 1:53am
Amen, Takis. Only contrast reveals personal Truth. Thank you for your comment; appreciated.
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18th Sep 2017 10:33pm
"Reading my mail".....
tryin't' Teach me sumpthin?
g'oddbless ye, dearest.
tryin't' Teach me sumpthin?
g'oddbless ye, dearest.
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19th Sep 2017 1:55am
Ha! Now that would be illegal, Danny! ( But yeah! ) Thank you, glad to know you survived Irma!
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5th Oct 2017 4:06pm
this is deep wisdom i'm grateful not to have missed today
a very powerful write
the spirit of it is deeply felt
thank you dearest poetess for this jewel..
~Raven
a very powerful write
the spirit of it is deeply felt
thank you dearest poetess for this jewel..
~Raven
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