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Random Rain
It’s all about an irrational invasion
without my official permission
they cut out the blue sky and decline
randomly with no apology
disturb the peace land of my never-mind
No body but me
push out the glass-paned window
with a delusion of paranoia
I’m daydreaming to give
this water color painting a rainbow
Heavy raindrops faded away my foresight
and yet, heave up my insight
wondering why those sparrows
standing on cables
never worry about wearing raincoats
Pondering what reasons
made the seasons
mess up such unconsciously
perhaps it just maybe
only because of God’s plan
coming up intentionally
Neighborhood houses are hidden
by the pearled sheer panels
when the glistened beads hit the tin eaves
clip-clop, clip-clop, clip-clop
the metallic noises mix with pitter-patters
easily mistaken for thousands of horse hoofs
clattering through the roofs
A little pissed about his delay
keep me such a long wait
no body but me
close the wooden sash
let the dripping raindrops
remain falling in a rush
My heart is a tiny lonely city
as heavy as gravity
I closed it tight to make it quiet
but the hazy mirage about his coming
keep me out peeking
Expecting the next passer-by
soon will pass by
I know who, I really do
he is the last love of mine
truly is oh, my true love
Knock, knock
a beautiful mistake was made
by the unexpectedly random rain
he is not my returned lover
but just one and only
a stranded traveler
without my official permission
they cut out the blue sky and decline
randomly with no apology
disturb the peace land of my never-mind
No body but me
push out the glass-paned window
with a delusion of paranoia
I’m daydreaming to give
this water color painting a rainbow
Heavy raindrops faded away my foresight
and yet, heave up my insight
wondering why those sparrows
standing on cables
never worry about wearing raincoats
Pondering what reasons
made the seasons
mess up such unconsciously
perhaps it just maybe
only because of God’s plan
coming up intentionally
Neighborhood houses are hidden
by the pearled sheer panels
when the glistened beads hit the tin eaves
clip-clop, clip-clop, clip-clop
the metallic noises mix with pitter-patters
easily mistaken for thousands of horse hoofs
clattering through the roofs
A little pissed about his delay
keep me such a long wait
no body but me
close the wooden sash
let the dripping raindrops
remain falling in a rush
My heart is a tiny lonely city
as heavy as gravity
I closed it tight to make it quiet
but the hazy mirage about his coming
keep me out peeking
Expecting the next passer-by
soon will pass by
I know who, I really do
he is the last love of mine
truly is oh, my true love
Knock, knock
a beautiful mistake was made
by the unexpectedly random rain
he is not my returned lover
but just one and only
a stranded traveler
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Re. Random Rain
12th Sep 2017 5:16pm
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12th Sep 2017 5:22pm
Thank you Sky, for spending time reading my poem. I don't like rainy days but I like to feel them and watch them . Nice to meet you here and really appreciate your support! RoseJasmine
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12th Sep 2017 5:38pm
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12th Sep 2017 5:46pm
Thank you! I think it's a nice twist...should give readers a surprise.... Glad you like it and much appreciate! RoseJasmine
Re. Random Rain
12th Sep 2017 5:27pm
excellent
marvelous
beautiful
see
how many more
now onwards will read ye
I shall also once again
as comments rain
and DUP in poetry
you reign
Congrats poet once again
marvelous
beautiful
see
how many more
now onwards will read ye
I shall also once again
as comments rain
and DUP in poetry
you reign
Congrats poet once again
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Re: Re. Random Rain
12th Sep 2017 5:34pm
Dear Again, thank you for reading my poem once again. I tried to write something touching, and glad you like it. Your comment means a lot to me as I can feel your sincere heart....... RoseJasmine
Re: Re. Random Rain
12th Sep 2017 5:41pm
at this juncture for ur kind words poet fiend I bow but compose at least one every two days I do two each day mind rains as i cum again on eroticae so often may switch over to softy ones like spongy ones
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Re: Re. Random Rain
13th Sep 2017 2:52am
One every two days would be a challenge for me. I will try to write faster.....Thank you..... RoseJasmine
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13th Sep 2017 5:51pm
i compose 10 a day u may at least one but yes maintain quality i don't bother really all cum for me okay to me
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14th Sep 2017 6:06am
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14th Sep 2017 4:51pm
no expectations but mind one must sharpen read others often your mind will instantly vomit a new one just try read one
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Re. Random Rain
12th Sep 2017 7:11pm
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13th Sep 2017 3:50pm
Hey J, feel so nice to get your comment and the RL add. Rainy days always give me some special imagination and inspiration. Hopefully I have expressed it beautifully.....again thank you for your support! RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. Random Rain
Hey Silence, lol your name is the same as one of my poem's titles. Thank you for the nice comment even though you said you "obliviously don't know much about poem". I am still happy because your reading is special to me..... RoseJasmine
Re. Random Rain
12th Sep 2017 10:40pm
Hy Rose.Your poem is a version of my Autumn .
Glad you have create such wonderful poem.
Glad you have create such wonderful poem.
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Re: Re. Random Rain
13th Sep 2017 4:01pm
Hey Andi, thank you for reading my poem and the nice comment. I have read your poem Autumn. It's very nice. Really appreciate your support! RoseJasmine
Re. Random Rain
13th Sep 2017 2:56pm
Gosh...this was beautiful...even with the tinge of bittersweet, it's still very beautiful...you are seriously evolving into a true poetic force! :)
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Re: Re. Random Rain
14th Sep 2017 2:54am
Hey my dear friend, nice to read your comment. Glad you think im evolving into a real poetic force. I politely think there's still a long way for me to go and i am looking forward to walking on it....love, RoseJasmine
Re. Random Rain
13th Sep 2017 7:33pm
A beautifully descriptive write ... personally I love the rain and the way you have portrayed it here .. even in its melancholy tones ...
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Re: Re. Random Rain
14th Sep 2017 2:44am
Hey thank you Jemac. It's so nice to have your words here. Your poems amazingly hit my heart all the time. It's my honor to get your nice comment. You made my day start in a beautiful way..... Love, RoseJasmine
Re. Random Rain
16th Sep 2017 10:57am
Better to be rained upon by a passing storm
then never to have kissed raindrops at all...
Perhaps the storm we wait for will never strike with thunder,
but if the lightning comes, let it rain like a hurricane...
I loved the imagery of your poem, though bitter sweet...
Perhaps the winds blew just as they were meant to blow!
JJ
then never to have kissed raindrops at all...
Perhaps the storm we wait for will never strike with thunder,
but if the lightning comes, let it rain like a hurricane...
I loved the imagery of your poem, though bitter sweet...
Perhaps the winds blew just as they were meant to blow!
JJ
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Re: Re. Random Rain
JJ, thank you for the read and the comment. Hope the rain is just what we need, not the precursor of a curricane.... I just heard that there was a hurricane coming and caused a lot of damage..... "Let it rain like a curricane" could be fun for the rain itself.... Glad you love it! Appreciate your support JJ! RoseJasmine
Re. Random Rain
18th Sep 2017 5:24am
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18th Sep 2017 5:58am
Thank you Harry, nice to meet you here. Glad you like my poem. Really enjoy your visit and the thought you shared. Much appreciate your support! RoseJasmine
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19th Sep 2017 1:14pm
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19th Sep 2017 1:43pm
Hello Misan, thank you for stopping by and sharing your thought. I guess you had the same experience as me....so maybe I may read your poem about rain soon....RoseJasmine
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Anonymous
25th Sep 2017 2:18am
Hey Rose.....an amazing ink......I luv the rain.......it inspires passion........wonderful ink my friend........purple luv & hugs xo :)
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25th Sep 2017 2:54am
Dear Flowergirl, thank you so much. your reading and commenting mean a lot to me. Glad you like it. Much appreciate.... RoseJasmine
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Anonymous
13th Dec 2017 3:39pm
This is beautiful RJ - even laced with the sad undertones it speaks beauty.
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Re: Re. Random Rain
13th Dec 2017 4:05pm
So nice of you to spend time reading it. Like dreaming in rainy days, and sometimes come up with special feelings for writing. Very glad to have your comment on it dear Sophie.
Much love, RoseJasmine
Much love, RoseJasmine