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Yup, we ARE Family...
To the family I love...
to this union, on this day
thanks to the almighty above
We gather to reconnect
lather, in the comfort
of brothers n' sisters,
aunts, uncles, nieces
n' nephews
as all recollect, peruse,
as a whole, we introspect...
of those days gone by,
here in the present tense,
a future yet to realize...
The Wise woman,
Still... standin' tall,
the departed of they
who've been called...
Joyous, I pray
our day to be
grateful...for another
opportunity to see,
the smiles in the eyes
of the young,
hear the laughter
ease the ache of old
To feel the wisdom
course the veins, infused
with views of lessons
learned n' retold...
We are a family...
forever, however,
why ever, we came to be
my hope, is for us all
to be better tomorrow
in life, in soul, in mind
for us, for them, for life
by our maker's decree...
I pray for this...for me
for us, our entire family...
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Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
30th Aug 2017 10:55am
Hey, this is great. Love the family union you had. From this poem, I know how much you love your family.....you are such a nice person.
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
30th Aug 2017 11:00am
Thank you my sweetness, yea I do but sometimes I wanna kill em! JK...sadly everyone couldn't be in the vid. They are still trying to arrive, I was just a bit impatient lol
Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
30th Aug 2017 11:56am
dearest Poe this brought me many smiles
reminds me of reunions with my son in law
& daughter's get together with his family
the eating is great & the company fantastic
you have a beautiful family & yes you are up :)
love Crim
reminds me of reunions with my son in law
& daughter's get together with his family
the eating is great & the company fantastic
you have a beautiful family & yes you are up :)
love Crim
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Re: Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
30th Aug 2017 12:29pm
Aaawww... well I wish you more of those in the future... I was up at that moment, n Yea got a crazy, but loving family lol...Ty my dearest :)
Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
30th Aug 2017 12:45pm
This is beautiful, PoetikOne. Heartfelt and caring. Very tender in perspective.
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Re: Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
30th Aug 2017 1:21pm
Thank you my dear lady, I'm grateful as always n appreciate the continued support :)
Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
30th Aug 2017 2:38pm
Amen.
This is such a beautiful tribute to family, the ones now past, who's wisdom and memory, is echoed by the ones present today, so it may be carried forward to the ones of tomorrows yet to shine.
I wish you all sweet sailings upon this ocean of life.
Very nice these words so warm,
a written prayer in poetic form
This is such a beautiful tribute to family, the ones now past, who's wisdom and memory, is echoed by the ones present today, so it may be carried forward to the ones of tomorrows yet to shine.
I wish you all sweet sailings upon this ocean of life.
Very nice these words so warm,
a written prayer in poetic form
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Re: Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
30th Aug 2017 7:41pm
Thank you my friend, it was indeed a great time n day for all... appreciate you tons :)
Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
30th Aug 2017 2:45pm
Re: Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
30th Aug 2017 7:43pm
Would've been really cool if I could've hooked up with u there bro. The way my fam. Is u would've instantly been adopted lol...thanks so much for the continued support...appreciated.
Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
30th Aug 2017 4:01pm
Cool video! "fix me a plate ... who gonna fix that plate!" ... Love that! made me want some! Talks of secret governments and the "Boo-gee" cousins ... LMAO!
This is what summer is all about!
This is what summer is all about!
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Re: Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
30th Aug 2017 7:44pm
Wow u caught all of that huh? lol Glad you enjoyed, I thank you much bro. Always
Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
30th Aug 2017 6:56pm
my family is the same....we are all so blessed...great write friend-J
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Re: Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
1st Sep 2017 10:14am
Blessed is true, n I thank you bro. Truly n always appreciate the support. :)
Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
1st Sep 2017 5:13am
Re: Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
1st Sep 2017 6:11pm
Well howdy do lady! lol...thank you I'm glad you enjoyed n I'm grateful for the spot by...appreciate it :)
Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
1st Sep 2017 5:54pm
Oh wow I LOVED this !!! Wonderful Job
Many times I pee my pants with the men in my family and how they get on each other or how they get my drunk aunt all riled up on the dance floor . Rem No matter what, the summer's just go way too FAST and I'm so sad to see this summer end, but looking at your video will keep me there lol.
Many times I pee my pants with the men in my family and how they get on each other or how they get my drunk aunt all riled up on the dance floor . Rem No matter what, the summer's just go way too FAST and I'm so sad to see this summer end, but looking at your video will keep me there lol.
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Re: Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
1st Sep 2017 6:14pm
My heart smiles from your comment, because it sounds very much like ours! N Yea summer goes far too fast, as do all good times seemingly...deeply appreciate your thoughts n time on my ink sweetness :)
Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
Anonymous
3rd Sep 2017 9:31pm
i don't know the meaning of fanily, but if there's a definition for it
then this would be it! Beautiful!!
then this would be it! Beautiful!!
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Re: Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
3rd Sep 2017 9:39pm
Aaawww...that breaks my heart...I'm very sorry to that ...but I do thank you most graciously my friend.
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Anonymous
3rd Sep 2017 9:43pm
sshh..no heart breaking..your video made me happy!
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Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
5th Sep 2017 2:36am
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5th Sep 2017 10:10am
Thank you, I'm very grateful that you did,n I truly appreciate your thoughts n support :)
Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
8th Sep 2017 1:23pm
Im a sucker for the softer side of this place, you know that. This is beautiful. <3
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Re: Re. Yup, we ARE Family...
8th Sep 2017 1:29pm
Hey sweetheart...thank you, happy you ate n I'm grateful for ur support as always :)