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What Would You Do If I...........................
"Hey dark, sensual lady"
A deep, probing question for beautiful U
My inquiring mind truly wants to know
What you'd do if I put my *dick* deep inside of you
You and I have mutually masturbated each others minds for months
And in some almost metaphysical way, we seem to know each other as "kindred spirits" do
I recall very vividly
how in the wee hours of the morning, you tease my mind with all
the nasty, decadent, sinful little things you want to do.......
.....to me, sexy baby.
Now, here I stand
A for real, beautiful, dark-chocolate, sexy, sensual kinda' man
Who stands in wonder
as to what you would do
If without warning, I bend you over the kitchen table
and thrust my thick, black cock deep inside of you
The table is the second thing that I see
as I enter into your door.
You are definitely the first thing, the first time
and I want to know more....
Adorned in a beautiful Tangerine dress
Colors so regal and bright
You move just like a majestic queen
It's fabric frames your body just right
Yet my beautiful queen, do I detect an itch
that needs a manly scratch?
My big strong hands playing in your soft curly mound
That would be a perfect match
How we've teased each other for month's on end
You remembered the "chicken wings"
Between my full lips, you shove one in
You suck your fingers into your perfectly formed mouth
Geographically, my mind leaves all northern thoughts and
rapidly heads down south.....
......as you tease me again and again and again
Sittin' across the room; the truth in full view
Legs slightly open and not a stitch of panties on you
Just a beautiful, gleaming smile
From moist lips above and below
The fragrant smell of pheremones rising
Those dreaming eyes of mine, there I go, there I go, there I go
......as my mind drifts slowly
Playing about your pussy lips
gently with my fingertips
Making your wet, creamy silky kitty cream
Responding to my touch, her mouth opens as if to scream
Fervently sucking your swollen clit
Bursting forth from within your ample folds
I taste your nectar upon my tongue
It copiously drips from deep within that beautiful hole....
....between those thick thighs and beautiful legs
Mmmmmm, all those things I long to do
Before I stab this hot throbbing dagger deep inside of you
Momentarily, my eyes are closed
Very deep in thought.
You move there beside me
Your body fragrant, tender and oh so soft
As my eyes begin to open,
Your hand is on my thigh
I smile and look upon your heavenly face
As your actions offer in earnest, a welcome reply.....
.....to the original, proposed question
Your answer clearly in view
Your hand firmly squeezes my throbbing shaft
"Oh what you'll do when I stick my big dick
deep
inside
of
U"
A deep, probing question for beautiful U
My inquiring mind truly wants to know
What you'd do if I put my *dick* deep inside of you
You and I have mutually masturbated each others minds for months
And in some almost metaphysical way, we seem to know each other as "kindred spirits" do
I recall very vividly
how in the wee hours of the morning, you tease my mind with all
the nasty, decadent, sinful little things you want to do.......
.....to me, sexy baby.
Now, here I stand
A for real, beautiful, dark-chocolate, sexy, sensual kinda' man
Who stands in wonder
as to what you would do
If without warning, I bend you over the kitchen table
and thrust my thick, black cock deep inside of you
The table is the second thing that I see
as I enter into your door.
You are definitely the first thing, the first time
and I want to know more....
Adorned in a beautiful Tangerine dress
Colors so regal and bright
You move just like a majestic queen
It's fabric frames your body just right
Yet my beautiful queen, do I detect an itch
that needs a manly scratch?
My big strong hands playing in your soft curly mound
That would be a perfect match
How we've teased each other for month's on end
You remembered the "chicken wings"
Between my full lips, you shove one in
You suck your fingers into your perfectly formed mouth
Geographically, my mind leaves all northern thoughts and
rapidly heads down south.....
......as you tease me again and again and again
Sittin' across the room; the truth in full view
Legs slightly open and not a stitch of panties on you
Just a beautiful, gleaming smile
From moist lips above and below
The fragrant smell of pheremones rising
Those dreaming eyes of mine, there I go, there I go, there I go
......as my mind drifts slowly
Playing about your pussy lips
gently with my fingertips
Making your wet, creamy silky kitty cream
Responding to my touch, her mouth opens as if to scream
Fervently sucking your swollen clit
Bursting forth from within your ample folds
I taste your nectar upon my tongue
It copiously drips from deep within that beautiful hole....
....between those thick thighs and beautiful legs
Mmmmmm, all those things I long to do
Before I stab this hot throbbing dagger deep inside of you
Momentarily, my eyes are closed
Very deep in thought.
You move there beside me
Your body fragrant, tender and oh so soft
As my eyes begin to open,
Your hand is on my thigh
I smile and look upon your heavenly face
As your actions offer in earnest, a welcome reply.....
.....to the original, proposed question
Your answer clearly in view
Your hand firmly squeezes my throbbing shaft
"Oh what you'll do when I stick my big dick
deep
inside
of
U"
Written by
MusicallyMrM
(Mr_Mahogany_Wood)
Published 8th Sep 2011
| Edited 19th Sep 2011
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Luck lady
Anonymous
8th Sep 2011 8:02pm
she's gonna get hers is what she's gonna do,no doubt this was a sexy read!
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re: Luck lady
8th Sep 2011 8:15pm
Thank you..........I didn't want it to sound as if this was written by some kind of rapist. But through our straight laced, straight laced conventionalism, we all possess thoughts just as these. Want to be open and honest but you have to exhibit the "expected candor". This speaks to the urgency and desire we all feel sometimes........men and women alike.
Hmmm........wonder if this one is a bit autobiographical? ; )
Hmmm........wonder if this one is a bit autobiographical? ; )
lucky girl....lol
8th Sep 2011 8:38pm
if u can do wut u say
den we can lead da charge 2 stop girls from turnin gay
bcuz gay men really dont concern me
but doze sexy asses lips hips eyes & thighs wantn each otha nstead of i really burns me
as men we hav 2 stand up & b men
im a fan of eatn pussy....i hope dats not a sin
& if u do urs bcuz im sure 2 do my part
deez ladies wil stop wantn ladies & bring demselves bac 2 wantn our hearts.....
gr8 post dude....fite da good fite wit me....lol
den we can lead da charge 2 stop girls from turnin gay
bcuz gay men really dont concern me
but doze sexy asses lips hips eyes & thighs wantn each otha nstead of i really burns me
as men we hav 2 stand up & b men
im a fan of eatn pussy....i hope dats not a sin
& if u do urs bcuz im sure 2 do my part
deez ladies wil stop wantn ladies & bring demselves bac 2 wantn our hearts.....
gr8 post dude....fite da good fite wit me....lol
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re: lucky girl....lol
8th Sep 2011 8:44pm
No doubt, I got you. Some ladies kill me with the concept that "all the good brothers" are missing in action in every way. We got to represent.
Steamy
8th Sep 2011 9:14pm
Steamy hot sex..you sound like you know your way around a woman and give it to her the way any woman would love..alright now!!!! :) peace Crim
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re: Steamy
8th Sep 2011 9:27pm
TY Crim
I have a quote that states that "I am my words and thoughts and my words and thoughts are me"
; )
I have a quote that states that "I am my words and thoughts and my words and thoughts are me"
; )
well...
8th Sep 2011 10:22pm
Well... what can I add to that, (first let me get a cool drink and turn on the fan woooowee!!!) now that I can think clearly "ahemm" I would have to concur with the gentlemen and in all fairness have to say it goes both ways. when you make love, MAKE LOVE... like it's art, enjoy every part of it in every way and most of all take your time and savor it.
gypsy red
gypsy red
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re: well...
8th Sep 2011 10:26pm
Hmmm
8th Sep 2011 10:31pm
what would you do...
it feels like a Barry White song... all deep and slow like that; what were you listening to when you wrote this?
I'm thinking it reads like a sexy r&b song. One of those songs that talks the panties right off a girl.. but you go where they definitely didn't...
Maybe it's like Barry White covering R. Kelly.
Whatever it is, it works, and your girl is definitely in for it... damn!
I'm thinking it reads like a sexy r&b song. One of those songs that talks the panties right off a girl.. but you go where they definitely didn't...
Maybe it's like Barry White covering R. Kelly.
Whatever it is, it works, and your girl is definitely in for it... damn!
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re: what would you do...
8th Sep 2011 11:19pm
wow! Barry meets R.Kelly. Though I am a musician by trade, I actually was actually just building on this idea I've had for a couple of days. Thoughts we have but don't really share. I look at her and she looks at me-I'm wondering what it feels like and how wild it's gonna' be and she's thinking, wow that's a big dick; does he know how to use it and how deep she wants to ride it. Stuff you see in each other's eyes but you just can'r bring yourself to say the words...........smh
re: re: what would you do...
9th Sep 2011 1:33am
there's a rhythm in the lines.. I thought it was from listening to music, but the fact that you're a musician explains it.
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APPLAUSE
Anonymous
9th Sep 2011 1:39am
this is one of the best erotic poems i have read
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OoOoLaLa
10th Sep 2011 3:08am
Damn
14th Sep 2011 6:37pm
How did I miss this juicy piece.
My damn key will be left in the lock.
Thank for the wetness.
My damn key will be left in the lock.
Thank for the wetness.
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Seductive!!
17th Sep 2011 6:18pm
I love it! Good reading!..You must stop by my new blog http://nycslut.wordpress.com/2011/09/17/ladies-use-that-beautiful-body-to-keep-that-man-at-home/. That's what has kept me away for so long!
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Fingersnaps fingersnaps!!!
Anonymous
20th Oct 2011 8:14pm
Now that is some sexy prose! Love it, absolutely love it!
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Wow...Love it;)
16th Mar 2012 00:55am
U kno u have skills, man and i enjoy it and jus love how u do it!! 4 real, man ;)
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So Fucking Hottt!!!
7th May 2012 1:21pm
"Oh what you'll do when I stick my big dick
deep
inside
of
U"
Milk that piece boo!!!
<3'd it...yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!
deep
inside
of
U"
Milk that piece boo!!!
<3'd it...yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!
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Re: What Would You Do If I...........................
12th Jun 2012 6:43am
OH MY! Whew! You are so damn good!!! You have a way of forcing your audience to read from your very first line! This is an erotic and sensual write at it's best! Amazing penmanship! Got me heated! ;-)
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Re: What Would You Do If I...........................
4th Oct 2012 7:47pm
Reading your writings is never ending hedonism..wow, you take me there! :-)
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Re: What Would You Do If I.........see................
23rd Mar 2013 5:15am
Hmmmm... what to do ? what to do?.. tapping my finger against my lips.. she hs best be a smart one and just take it to the head... follow a few
paths and find the heart beat at the base and wait for that creamy filling.. LOL.. you are a mess MMM.. but man do I enjoy the flow or strokes of your pen.. thanks for sharing a pleasure to read
paths and find the heart beat at the base and wait for that creamy filling.. LOL.. you are a mess MMM.. but man do I enjoy the flow or strokes of your pen.. thanks for sharing a pleasure to read
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Re: What Would You Do If I...........................
19th Apr 2013 5:57pm
Fervently sucking your swollen clit
Bursting forth from within your ample folds
I taste your nectar upon my tongue
It copiously drips from deep within that beautiful hole.... HOT LINES
Bursting forth from within your ample folds
I taste your nectar upon my tongue
It copiously drips from deep within that beautiful hole.... HOT LINES
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Re: What Would You Do If I...........................
3rd Jan 2014 12:53pm
re: Re: What Would You Do If I...........................
3rd Jan 2014 4:17pm
: ) Come now, after "Chromosomes" and "Guilty Plea"....why would you be speechless Diva?
Thank You so much for reading and commenting btw
Thank You so much for reading and commenting btw
Re. What Would You Do If I...........................
Oh mih gaaaawwd Sensei!
Easily my favorite, because its pitch perfect
"Geographically, my mind leaves all northern thoughts and
rapidly heads down south..... my taste..
Baby this is special. I love this verse enough to have it tatooed on my inner thigh.
'"lhose dreaming eyes of mine, there I go, there I go, there I go"
Repitition here is a masters stroke of fuckery purrrrrfuckshun.
You are genius at remaining classy while talkin trashy.
Makes me
Wanna be irish cream to your dark chocolate lover.
Make me righteous woman under cover.
Legs slightly open and not a stitch of "panties on you
Just a beautiful, gleaming smile
From moist lips above and below "
A shine between labia sparkling clit wet vulva.
And mine is
Screaming.
🌹Jennifer
Easily my favorite, because its pitch perfect
"Geographically, my mind leaves all northern thoughts and
rapidly heads down south..... my taste..
Baby this is special. I love this verse enough to have it tatooed on my inner thigh.
'"lhose dreaming eyes of mine, there I go, there I go, there I go"
Repitition here is a masters stroke of fuckery purrrrrfuckshun.
You are genius at remaining classy while talkin trashy.
Makes me
Wanna be irish cream to your dark chocolate lover.
Make me righteous woman under cover.
Legs slightly open and not a stitch of "panties on you
Just a beautiful, gleaming smile
From moist lips above and below "
A shine between labia sparkling clit wet vulva.
And mine is
Screaming.
🌹Jennifer
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Re. What Would You Do If I...........................
30th Sep 2015 6:23pm
Sweet Queen, you flatter me so. Thank you for seeing beneath the surface. You are awakening some inner spirits that have been dormant for a brief spell and a raging flame beginning to burn >:-)
Re. What Would You Do If I...........................
1st Jan 2018 1:31pm
I would like to write a female version of this. Lol. Wow. Very sexual mr. Lol. I like. Dont get the part about chicken wings or a tangerine dress or curly mounds though.
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Re: Re. What Would You Do If I...........................
2nd Jan 2018 12:54pm
....by all means, let this be a catalyst for the creation of your next nasty little tryst. I would find it interesting to read this from the ladies point of view.
As far as the tangerine dress and the chicken wings (sigh), that was the autobiographical part of this scribe. (I remember her well and how funny I thought of her special meal.....chicken wings and "pie" wrapped in a regal tangerine dress) Lawd!! 😋
As far as the tangerine dress and the chicken wings (sigh), that was the autobiographical part of this scribe. (I remember her well and how funny I thought of her special meal.....chicken wings and "pie" wrapped in a regal tangerine dress) Lawd!! 😋
Re: Re. What Would You Do If I...........................
2nd Jan 2018 2:04pm