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write poetry like no one is reading
and
he wrote poetry
in a state
of trance
not a care
in the world
whether it made sense
to others
for he
had left others
to come
to their own senses
in a trance
of their own
in a dance
of their own
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Re. write poetry like none's reading
This is the exact way poetry should be written, for oneself first, then others have a clearer insight to the poet.
So well spoken in so few words.
So well spoken in so few words.
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Re: Re. write poetry like none's reading
a kindred spirit
agreement is natural.
as indicated
on my profile
the reason for my writing
is the inking of expression
in its purity
and for no other reason
the word
expression
is deeper
than is normally realized.
others
have other
very valid reasons too.
A peer's affirmation
is a reward
in delight.
agreement is natural.
as indicated
on my profile
the reason for my writing
is the inking of expression
in its purity
and for no other reason
the word
expression
is deeper
than is normally realized.
others
have other
very valid reasons too.
A peer's affirmation
is a reward
in delight.
Re: Re. write poetry like none's reading
A clarification on my initial comment, for I was not clear enough. Valid reasons are plentiful, my meaning was, poetry should be written from the perspective of the poet, from their heart and not merely to garner praise or agreement from the reader.
My error for not spending more time on my comment the first time.
I believe we are both in agreement here.
My error for not spending more time on my comment the first time.
I believe we are both in agreement here.
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Re: Re. write poetry like none's reading
your reason
first time around
was and is
absolutely valid.
no doubts
regarding the agreement.
your explanation is yes, yes and yes.
there is no
lasting joy
if done, in my view,
for mere comments/validation.
first time around
was and is
absolutely valid.
no doubts
regarding the agreement.
your explanation is yes, yes and yes.
there is no
lasting joy
if done, in my view,
for mere comments/validation.
Re. write poetry like no one is reading
22nd Aug 2017 5:45pm
this was a very easy add but a not so easy comment. in ways, it touches on a series of conversation i've shared recently with another poet iro audiences, authenticity, intimacy & writing.
we reached the same conclusion..
... what does the audience know anyway
we reached the same conclusion..
... what does the audience know anyway
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Re: Re. write poetry like no one is reading
there is poetry
for the audience
for the pleasure of the audience
for the applause of the audience
nothing what-so-ever wrong with that
then
there is poetry
for the sheer pleasure
of expression
in its purity
the un-burdened
the unadulterated
delivery
the inking
for the audience
for the pleasure of the audience
for the applause of the audience
nothing what-so-ever wrong with that
then
there is poetry
for the sheer pleasure
of expression
in its purity
the un-burdened
the unadulterated
delivery
the inking
Re. write poetry like no one is reading
23rd Aug 2017 11:28am
This is how we should write poetry, straight up from the heart and not for the reader, in the end it's a better experience for the reader. Great write.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
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Re: Re. write poetry like no one is reading
what's inked
from heart
is
inked from heart
result would be
for everyone
to see.
peer's visit
appreciation
appreciated
deep.
from heart
is
inked from heart
result would be
for everyone
to see.
peer's visit
appreciation
appreciated
deep.
Re. write poetry like no one is reading
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2017 4:53pm
This
says
some`thing
like
I need to be
a poet
of
no
conscience ...
~ Devlin
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Re: Re. write poetry like no one is reading
25th Aug 2017 10:49am
when
in trance
conscience
is left
for
the conscious ones.
a peer
visit
both appreciated deeply
in trance
conscience
is left
for
the conscious ones.
a peer
visit
both appreciated deeply
Re. write poetry like no one is reading
26th Aug 2017 5:29am
couldn't agree more.. that's when the magic happens... uninhibited truth straight from the heart... nicely written
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Re: Re. write poetry like no one is reading
some
may call this
akin
to graffiti
the uninhibited poetry
inked
as it descended.
people forget, some of the best form
of expression is not found in Louvre
but on the streets, under-birdges and rail yards.
a peer
with talent
and the peer's review
both
held close.
may call this
akin
to graffiti
the uninhibited poetry
inked
as it descended.
people forget, some of the best form
of expression is not found in Louvre
but on the streets, under-birdges and rail yards.
a peer
with talent
and the peer's review
both
held close.