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Penumbrae
Faith bears witness
in the dark aftermath;
its presence edging outskirts
Our plumed anxiety dissolved
by wonderous Belief
Already we've forgotten Its Omen
resplendence returning
hopeful within the firmament
Sometimes there isn't a God
unleashing the Kracken
from the Great Spirit's rib cage
to destroy relentlessly
Sometimes the Universe
tires of synchronizing Fate
overlooked by fearful ignorance
Sometimes Source itself says
Enough of the obvious;
Penumbrae
Presses Its callused Will
into a molasses mushroom;
extinguishes Light
in the absence of Balance, asks
Now do you see Destiny?
Spirits weary in Heart
by potential loss, whisper
c l e a r l y
~
in the dark aftermath;
its presence edging outskirts
Our plumed anxiety dissolved
by wonderous Belief
Already we've forgotten Its Omen
resplendence returning
hopeful within the firmament
Sometimes there isn't a God
unleashing the Kracken
from the Great Spirit's rib cage
to destroy relentlessly
Sometimes the Universe
tires of synchronizing Fate
overlooked by fearful ignorance
Sometimes Source itself says
Enough of the obvious;
Penumbrae
Presses Its callused Will
into a molasses mushroom;
extinguishes Light
in the absence of Balance, asks
Now do you see Destiny?
Spirits weary in Heart
by potential loss, whisper
c l e a r l y
~
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Re. Penumbrae
21st Aug 2017 3:43pm
Re: Re. Penumbrae
21st Aug 2017 11:09pm
Thank you, PoetikOne. I appreciate all the support and positive encouragement you lend me here. Happy Eclipse Day! 🌚
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Anonymous
- Edited 21st Aug 2017 7:05pm
21st Aug 2017 7:04pm
"molasses mushroom" and "plumed anxiety" ....... I am constantly amazed by such an artistry with words I've yet to achieve.
This is a beautiful rendition of an Eclipse, which I'm enjoying gazing at rather than risking the ruination of my eyes while gawking at the actual one.
This Poem is the stuff Bibles are made of in its wisdom shared to all who are reading.
This is a beautiful rendition of an Eclipse, which I'm enjoying gazing at rather than risking the ruination of my eyes while gawking at the actual one.
This Poem is the stuff Bibles are made of in its wisdom shared to all who are reading.

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Re: Re. Penumbrae
21st Aug 2017 11:12pm
Thank you for a beautifully gracious comment I hardly feel worthy of. Your Love and inspiration are the things Poetry is made of. And I am blessed beyond measure with the experience of it. 💜
Re. Penumbrae
21st Aug 2017 7:39pm
This is a wonderful piece. A good flow of words. Loved it. Quite beautiful.
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21st Aug 2017 11:13pm
Re. Penumbrae
21st Aug 2017 9:25pm
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Re. Penumbrae
21st Aug 2017 10:27pm
I am always challenged by what you write, my grey matter gets stretched and sparked, you never fail to impress me :-)
a wonderful write :-)
a wonderful write :-)
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Re: Re. Penumbrae
21st Aug 2017 11:17pm
Thank you, David. I always enjoy your comments and perspective. It's always so encouraging and supportive. 🌚
Re. Penumbrae
21st Aug 2017 10:59pm
"Spirits weary in Heart ".....n'ow, yknow, y'ain't
sposed to
eXpose me like that.......
bless you
sposed to
eXpose me like that.......
bless you
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Re: Re. Penumbrae
21st Aug 2017 11:19pm
Oh yes I am! I'm exposing everyone who needs Love! And believing they'll get it as well! Thank ye! 🌚
Re. Penumbrae
21st Aug 2017 11:54pm
and there's me thinking penumbrae was an estate in scotland ..
although given the covering of the sun .. :)
although given the covering of the sun .. :)
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