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Summer Rain
Awakened the bud
Petals unfold
About to blossom
Pollinate my gold
Sweet honey brewing
Wind keeps us moving
It's not the wet season
You're the reason
Summer sex is better in the rain
Petals unfold
About to blossom
Pollinate my gold
Sweet honey brewing
Wind keeps us moving
It's not the wet season
You're the reason
Summer sex is better in the rain
Published 19th Aug 2017
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19th Aug 2017 5:13pm
19th Aug 2017 9:38pm
20th Aug 2017 2:37am
Fairy, i love the floral metaphor. This passage is delicious:
"It's not the wet season
You're the reason "
Brava!
"It's not the wet season
You're the reason "
Brava!
20th Aug 2017 5:50am
Thank you Gahddess! I thought it suited the scenario well :) thank you for commenting
Anonymous
27th Aug 2017 7:55pm
Fairy.. a simply luscious erotic ink.. really dig you imagery, and the brilliance of your metaphoric phrasing.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
28th Aug 2017 5:57am
I let myself run wild in this, glad I did, and glad you enjoyed reading :)
