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some poems are never to be published
i wrote a poem
on the sands
of the beach
just when
the tide was out
this was
without a doubt
my shout
out loud
calling you
baring your name
for the sky to see
for the land to feel
and the ocean
to keep
Published 11th Aug 2017
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11th Aug 2017 4:54pm
11th Aug 2017 4:56pm
elements
have a longer memory.
they keep their secrets.
:-)
welcome is the peer
and the beautiful view.
have a longer memory.
they keep their secrets.
:-)
welcome is the peer
and the beautiful view.
11th Aug 2017 6:07pm
glitter's present
in the eyes
of the peer
welcome
is the peer
with beauty
inherent
in the vision
in the eyes
of the peer
welcome
is the peer
with beauty
inherent
in the vision
14th Aug 2017 2:03am
this was a nostalgic read! It flows within one's senses like water rushing to cover one's head before he is submerged under water. Simple but so deep it is like an initial perception of a concept only here it's about a love that is beyond the boundaries of expression, time, the need for affirmation, and recognition. hats off ! Lofty write!!!!!
15th Aug 2017 11:32pm
symbolism.
humbling is the peer's review.
appreciation
of both
the peer
and the review
held closest.
humbling is the peer's review.
appreciation
of both
the peer
and the review
held closest.
