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Re. Hi to Me
11th Aug 2017 2:39am
A poem to send back in time and hope it makes it through the wormhole in one piece...
I've written many to myself, mostly to do things I should have done. Excellent write Grace!
JJ
I've written many to myself, mostly to do things I should have done. Excellent write Grace!
JJ
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Re: Re. Hi to Me
11th Aug 2017 2:48am
Poetryman, even if this made it back through the time tunnel I would never have listened. I had the same advises from friends then...did I listen.......Noooo. Thanks for reading me:)
Re: Re. Hi to Me
11th Aug 2017 3:10am
I'd like to think I would at least listen to me, but ya never know... you know yourself better than anyone, if you won't take your own advice perhaps electricity would help... lol
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Re. Hi to Me
Hi Grace
I wondered what young Grace would do if she happened on this poetic letter. would she trust it enough to change her destiny ?
nicely worded, lady
*hat tip*
I wondered what young Grace would do if she happened on this poetic letter. would she trust it enough to change her destiny ?
nicely worded, lady
*hat tip*
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Re: Re. Hi to Me
11th Aug 2017 2:51am
Nopes, Lepp:) she would never listen to sound advises. She believed in making her own mistakes...which turned out to have caused her a lifetime of grief. I had an interesting ride but not sedate...thanks for reading me. much appreciated.
Re. Hi to Me
11th Aug 2017 9:59am
Hind sight is 20/20 it seems, it would be so good if our older selves could tell our younger selves what to stay away from, though if we didn't go through it we wouldn't know to stay away, that's the catch twenty-two. Great share, Grace.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
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Re: Re. Hi to Me
11th Aug 2017 12:26pm
Thank you anonshadow:) for reading me. Indeed! When young I always thought I knew almost everything.
Re. Hi to Me
11th Aug 2017 4:58pm
Hello young Grace,
I hope that the older you remembers that you were happy at that time, that despite her regret and pain, she was as she is and still is YOU.
I hope that the older you remembers that you were happy at that time, that despite her regret and pain, she was as she is and still is YOU.
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Re: Re. Hi to Me
12th Aug 2017 1:43am
sigh...yes, there were happy moments of course that I would never have experienced otherwise. Thanks Oxy for reading me.
Re. Hi to Me
12th Aug 2017 9:33pm
Hindsight might bring some wisdom but are the memories worth the pain? I all too often end up burned myself, learning nothing. I love this fine write and layout. Those flames look almost frozen...
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Re: Re. Hi to Me
13th Aug 2017 2:42am
You are right, Crowfly:) the memories are not worth the pain, only the consequences. Thank you for reading me as always.