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sinister slut
rage boils
just under the surface
I hunger for
what I can't have
release
fuck I feel pent up
like a bloke
with blue balls
whose whore dried up
& I can't shoot my load
cept i'm a woman
corseted
restrained
I want to let loose
those cruel words
that bite & tear
give it to me
damn it give it to me
i'll get to that place
this woman
is all warrior
fuck what you think
fuck what you want
I will be loosed
my wrath spilled
it's coming
boiling to the surface
searching for a crack
I will get in
laughing manically
I don't give a damn
if this makes sense
I'm finessing
operatic moans
from legions of demons
they will be heard
I whisper in screams
they resound in thunder claps
shaking the Earth
bringer of fear
I've a weapon locked & loaded
pointed at the faces of gods
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Re. sinister slut
7th Aug 2017 8:31pm
Jesus blasphemy you spit lol.
"I whisper in screams
they resound in thunder claps
shaking the Earth
bringer of fear
I've a weapon locked & loaded
pointed at the faces of gods "
You may have pissed some deitys off with this lol.
Let me back away before lightning hits
"I whisper in screams
they resound in thunder claps
shaking the Earth
bringer of fear
I've a weapon locked & loaded
pointed at the faces of gods "
You may have pissed some deitys off with this lol.
Let me back away before lightning hits
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Re: Re. sinister slut
8th Aug 2017 1:24am
giggles Quiet One your comment made me smile :) sometimes you just have to let it all go I feel better now.. love Crim
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Re: Re. sinister slut
8th Aug 2017 1:24am
Re. sinister slut
7th Aug 2017 9:49pm
fierce indeed, pulls no punches - I might go and hide now - scary :-(
excellent inking :-) Big Hugs :-)
excellent inking :-) Big Hugs :-)
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Re: Re. sinister slut
8th Aug 2017 1:25am
Re. sinister slut
7th Aug 2017 10:13pm
Holy crapshitzski!! U gave me a scare with this! lol awesome darkness my sweet Crim...
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Re: Re. sinister slut
8th Aug 2017 1:26am
thank you dearest Poe like I told David I hope not too scary.. love you.. Crim
Re. sinister slut
Anonymous
7th Aug 2017 10:44pm
My Beautiful Brenda, feeling all the emotions within this raging write which tears up the page...and this I know is just a little taste of what you have within you if there is a need to unleash all at once rather than in doses...keep breathing my love and allow all within you to flow freely when you need it to...
I love you madly, deeply
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you madly, deeply
With all my love - Taryn xoxo

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Re: Re. sinister slut
8th Aug 2017 1:27am
thank you my love you understand from our talks how important is as writer's to just release our feelings I deeply appreciate your encouragement.. I love you passionately.. love Brenda
Re. sinister slut
8th Aug 2017 00:36am
Coming on ultra strong,Brenda, in this mini-
ode to self imprisonment, and wanting out in
a big way, and oh yeah it makes sense to me
for sure.
ode to self imprisonment, and wanting out in
a big way, and oh yeah it makes sense to me
for sure.
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Re: Re. sinister slut
8th Aug 2017 1:28am
thank you dearest Jerry for embracing & understanding this write.. love you my friend.. Brenda
Re. sinister slut
Anonymous
8th Aug 2017 1:38am
My beautiful Dark Angel, your words here have the feeling of someone backed into a corner. Claws out, feet braced, your tone is strong and defiant. Crack that whip, beautiful, and issue warning.
So much love for you...
So much love for you...

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Re: Re. sinister slut
9th Aug 2017 2:45am
thank you graciously lovely one for understanding this write.. love you lady.. Crim
Re. sinister slut
Anonymous
8th Aug 2017 2:20am
Brenda.. spit the truth always.. this is fucking brilliant.. as are you.. i love you always, my sister..
Dave
Dave

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Re: Re. sinister slut
9th Aug 2017 2:46am
Re. sinister slut
8th Aug 2017 11:13am
Re: Re. sinister slut
9th Aug 2017 2:47am
Re. sinister slut
8th Aug 2017 1:17pm
Seeing red like a lunatic cracked! Can't say it's a favorite 'cause every fucking piece you gift us with is profoundly amazing! Meant it when I said haven't crossed paths with a writer like yourself in long times!
Who's the badass!? Yo' you da' badass!
Christopher
Who's the badass!? Yo' you da' badass!
Christopher
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Re: Re. sinister slut
9th Aug 2017 2:47am
thank you Christopher broad smiles on my face such a beautiful comment I am humbled.. love Brenda
Re. sinister slut
8th Aug 2017 9:13pm
Not just sinister but potentially very dangerous. You have shown such restraint, such patience, and now it's time to detonate.. You're a bringer of storms and beautiful lines Lady Crim.
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Re: Re. sinister slut
9th Aug 2017 2:48am
Re. sinister slut
Anonymous
9th Aug 2017 6:11am
a weapon you wield indeed...i tell ppl all the time on my shows 'kill fuckers, rape, annihilate, masturbate and drug sedate with the pen, get the evil out constructively, dont be another statistic jerk off shooting up some place cause you cant placate your minds madness, instead sit and cower in shame from natural schisms that can be used positively...its fucking retarded...get raw n relentless.....you do it well, shit after we lived so much of it and seen the cliffs edge too many times its welcome reprieve aint it?

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Re: Re. sinister slut
11th Aug 2017 00:56am
thank you Sinister One most graciously yes venting through writing helps enormously especially with my bipolar.. I deeply appreciate your thoughts.. love Crim
Re. sinister slut
9th Aug 2017 10:14am
this is why i read you, lovely one,
this hauntingly beautiful rage against the machine
xo
this hauntingly beautiful rage against the machine
xo
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Re: Re. sinister slut
11th Aug 2017 1:03am
thank you most graciously beautiful one your presence makes these kind of days worthwhile.. I love you.. Brenda