Positive Rant Senryu

So true !!

Thank you so much Ragnar .. for the read and thoughtful comments.. much appreciated

I love the tenderness of the content, Je Je.

The half-rhymes of words, courage, worth are very well done.
The assonance of the 'o' shines in this. xo

Because you have requested honest critique and I'd like to honor that request,
I would suggest removing the commas at the end of L1 & L2. They're already
natural pauses and commas detract from the flow.

Thank you so much Ahavati for the read and honest critique  .. always appreciated  x

nice message  

Thank you so much SatansSperm for the read and thoughtful comments  .. much appreciated

such power in so few words - Excellent! :-)

Thank you so much David for the read and thoughtful comments  ... always appreciated