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the lust & love pages
i pressed my pain
within the poetry pages
along with the flowers
i picked along the way
dried now they still hold beauty
& so do you love
i put away my desire
so i could exist in a world
that doesn't include a me & you
my poetic heart still beats out
its deep need & ache
a place in me is empty
you tempered my storm
with a powerful intellect
i wonder do you burn
do you feel my pull?
in your logic you saw clearly
& walked away one day
you are the best of me
the love of a man
i will never have
is a cherished feeling
to know what it is to long
& be consumed
in the most true & carnal sense
then press it neatly in a book
eventually the wettest of lust dries
of all the flowers
picked along the way
you are the rarest
& most poignant
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Re. the lust & love pages
15th Jul 2017 2:26pm
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15th Jul 2017 2:34pm
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15th Jul 2017 2:47pm
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Anonymous
15th Jul 2017 2:56pm
Can definitely feel the pull Crim !
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15th Jul 2017 3:13pm
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15th Jul 2017 4:18pm
Superb writing, Brenda. You delved straight into your heart and "told it as it is." You have that power within you, and it shines brightly each and every day.
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15th Jul 2017 4:21pm
thank you dearest Jerry for showing me love on this write.. love you my friend.. xo Brenda
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Anonymous
15th Jul 2017 4:45pm
Oh my beautiful Dark Angel...I'm not even going to attempt to say anything beyond this...This is exquisite. Flowers hold their beauty long after the life leaves them and this captures the essence of love lost so perfectly.
So much love for you...
So much love for you...
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Re: Re. the lust & love pages
15th Jul 2017 6:18pm
thank you lovely one most graciously he remains my love safely tucked in the poetry pages where love never dies.. I love you lady.. Crim
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Intellect and storm might be the perfect match. They balance each other for romantic and creative reasons.
my poetic heart still beats out
its deep need & ache
a place in me is empty
you tempered my storm
with a powerful intellect
I just hope temperance preserves some of the storm I've come to know and love. Fine work Lady Crim.
my poetic heart still beats out
its deep need & ache
a place in me is empty
you tempered my storm
with a powerful intellect
I just hope temperance preserves some of the storm I've come to know and love. Fine work Lady Crim.
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15th Jul 2017 6:19pm
the storm still brews under the surface dearest Sir Crow i'm just learning when it is the right time to release it.. love Crim
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15th Jul 2017 9:00pm
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15th Jul 2017 10:01pm
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Anonymous
15th Jul 2017 9:15pm
Brenda.. a heartfelt brilliant ink.. love you, sister..
Dave
Dave
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15th Jul 2017 10:02pm
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15th Jul 2017 10:10pm
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15th Jul 2017 10:13pm
thank you most graciously dearest Quiet one for such a very lovely comment.. love Crim
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16th Jul 2017 00:17am
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16th Jul 2017 00:20am
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Anonymous
16th Jul 2017 3:19am
My Beautiful Brenda...oh my...these words grip the soul and give visuals almost too real...I see these flowers...and that one line is palatable...such a wonderful use of metaphor....you leave me in awe of your talent my love...
I love you passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
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16th Jul 2017 7:10am
thank you my love i knew you would understand this depth of love & desire love blooms just like a desert flower & remains beautiful long after the lust dries.. I love you passionately.. love Brenda
Re. the lust & love pages
16th Jul 2017 11:02am
Wrenching at the soul, this beautiful spills slowly like honey...yet it aches goin down...masterful ink letting!
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16th Jul 2017 2:38pm
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16th Jul 2017 3:27pm
"i put away my desire
so i could exist in a world
that doesn't include a me & you
my poetic heart still beats out
its deep need & ache
a place in me is empty
you tempered my storm
with a powerful intellect"
^^^^
this makes me want to weep for the familiar ache.
at least we'll always have the flowers
xo
so i could exist in a world
that doesn't include a me & you
my poetic heart still beats out
its deep need & ache
a place in me is empty
you tempered my storm
with a powerful intellect"
^^^^
this makes me want to weep for the familiar ache.
at least we'll always have the flowers
xo
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17th Jul 2017 9:24am
thank you beautiful one for feeling me so deeply on this write.. I love you lady & here's to the fade of that ache.. I cherish you lovely one.. love Brenda
Re. the lust & love pages
18th Jul 2017 3:24am
This is a beautiful tribute to the art of flower pressing, and the art of love...
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18th Jul 2017 1:02pm
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19th Jul 2017 3:11am
beautiful. there is a deep sweetness and tenderness in these words, I especially love how you closed it out
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19th Jul 2017 3:18am
thank you most graciously Free One I have a deep love & appreciation for this poet.. love Crim
Re. the lust & love pages
13th Sep 2018 11:10am
Every part of me burns, In the pull of ur turns, even though it's dried on the surface, deep down the fragrance is still fresh........
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Re: Re. the lust & love pages
14th Sep 2018 11:49pm
thank you dearest Augustomni for such a beautifully uplifting comment ✨
love Crimsin
love Crimsin