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Feminism Dies
Man learns logic and reason
Man kills his creator
Just because he can
Man invents computers
Computers kill off man
Computers learn and regret
Computers re-create man
Man destroys computers
Purely out of revenge
Using computers
That look like men
Computer men kill men
Keeping women for sex
Women who didn’t want sex
Eliminated computer men
And hide computer secrets
In a vegetarian recipe book
Where nobody will ever look
Women invent sperm
And the genetics of a
Female only population
At last feminism dies
And women rule
Despite regret
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Re. Feminism Dies
10th Jul 2017 2:38am
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10th Jul 2017 9:06pm
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10th Jul 2017 2:40am
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10th Jul 2017 9:07pm
Re. Feminism Dies
10th Jul 2017 9:25am
are there vibrators tho. inquiring minds would like to know.
this is bloody brilliant, mister
this is bloody brilliant, mister
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Re: Re. Feminism Dies
10th Jul 2017 9:09pm
Yes they have vibrators that have kick starts and side stands - vrooom vrooom! so glad you enjoyed my musing :-)
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Anonymous
10th Jul 2017 1:39pm
^^^^
What shadoe said! Much enjoyed the convoluted trail this one followed.
What shadoe said! Much enjoyed the convoluted trail this one followed.

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Re: Re. Feminism Dies
10th Jul 2017 9:10pm
Re. Feminism Dies
10th Jul 2017 6:38pm
David you have deep intellect
which finesses the mind with your logic
that is a rare gift..
love & hugs Brenda
which finesses the mind with your logic
that is a rare gift..
love & hugs Brenda
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10th Jul 2017 9:11pm
Re. Feminism Dies
10th Jul 2017 7:14pm
What a delightful twist! There would be much regret indeed ( or so I feel ). There's too much beauty in both genders for one to exist without the other.
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Re: Re. Feminism Dies
10th Jul 2017 9:13pm
Re. Feminism Dies
Ahhh...at what price, indeed--gender equality! I couldn't help a wistful smile at the subtle irony of this one!( Sort of follows the idea of being careful of what one wishes for...)
Inexplicable...how it seems, that certain, overlooked consequences, invariably come with the ultimate attainment of certain goals... With that in mind...as regards to a darker aspect, i thought about, when i finished reading : in this new, female only society, was gender selection perfected? ( if not...were males simply "eliminated"??) Wondering.....only wondering...:p (Tragic...sad...awful...either way)
BTW...have you ever considered writing any Sci-Fi themed short stories/novels? Or...perhaps,continuing with further poems developed from/inspired by, this piece? I believe you have quite a talent for creating in this genre, My Friend!
Fond of Science Fiction, and hope you will share more of this theme!
Inexplicable...how it seems, that certain, overlooked consequences, invariably come with the ultimate attainment of certain goals... With that in mind...as regards to a darker aspect, i thought about, when i finished reading : in this new, female only society, was gender selection perfected? ( if not...were males simply "eliminated"??) Wondering.....only wondering...:p (Tragic...sad...awful...either way)
BTW...have you ever considered writing any Sci-Fi themed short stories/novels? Or...perhaps,continuing with further poems developed from/inspired by, this piece? I believe you have quite a talent for creating in this genre, My Friend!
Fond of Science Fiction, and hope you will share more of this theme!
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Re. Feminism Dies
10th Jul 2017 9:21pm
I have written some short stories and have two novel plans - but I just don't have the patience to spend the amount of time it would take.
I think in my mind women had invented or created a type of sperm that would only produce female babies - I think I was trying to reverse China (lol) :-)
I will ponder more Sci-fi, but almost all of the sci-fi poems I have written have been tongue in cheek or comedic - thanks for your read and such positive comments :-) - Hugs :-)
I think in my mind women had invented or created a type of sperm that would only produce female babies - I think I was trying to reverse China (lol) :-)
I will ponder more Sci-fi, but almost all of the sci-fi poems I have written have been tongue in cheek or comedic - thanks for your read and such positive comments :-) - Hugs :-)
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Anonymous
- Edited 10th Jul 2017 9:27pm
10th Jul 2017 9:26pm
David, you and your bottles and colored caps...I hope you never run out of any! Enjoyed this even though I did gasp momentarily thinking of only women walking around...many can be bitchy and catty and I'm not such a fan...can the recipe be sure to avoid such ingredients?!! But then again perhaps the vibrators would take my mind off of that....wait...can we have both??
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn

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