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echo
my divinity is stretched across eons
i blinked one day & saw you
then closed my eyes you vanished
i grew lonely in isolation
created nature to decorate
my prism of hope
i imagined that one day
there would be you & i
i made this place
with faces like mine
you were intrigued
in immortal form you came
to intermingle with this race
i connected with your grace
then came the technical age
& again you disappeared
among the gadgets
might as well be masturbating myself
furiously rubbing Gaia
i erupt my orgasmic chaos
a temporal itch
scratched by me alone
we connect & disconnect
like a celestial one night stand
i feel your ebb & pull
i'm calling you away
from your mistresses
the whores you visit
vodka kisses
my homeostasis
you love me you say
but you are a rogue
traveler from far away
engaging & disengaging at will
when will i see you
without the blur
that is you?
this is a private pulse
sent out to the cosmos
echo back a hello
let me feel you deep inside
force me to submit
i'm out of control
dominate me with a firm hand
spank my cosmic bottom
you set me into motion
blessed all of my moons
then you left me alone
eternal drifter
with evil imaginations
put to end my wandering
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 10th Jul 2017
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Anonymous
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Anonymous
10th Jul 2017 1:48am
Brenda... so beautifully done... i'm just blown away.. truly enjoyed this.. love you my sister...
Dave
Dave
10th Jul 2017 2:07am
10th Jul 2017 2:26am
as with most of your poetry I find it moving and inspiring - I take lots of notes and I always end up writing something :-)
hugs and thank yous :-)
hugs and thank yous :-)
10th Jul 2017 4:55am
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10th Jul 2017 4:56am
10th Jul 2017 5:44am
It's been a long time, talented one,
your beautiful words...
They leave me speachless...
your beautiful words...
They leave me speachless...
10th Jul 2017 8:21am
10th Jul 2017 6:10am
it's not so much a one night stand
if the night lasts a long time;
a dance among shadows, Crim...
if the night lasts a long time;
a dance among shadows, Crim...
10th Jul 2017 8:21am
Anonymous
10th Jul 2017 9:40am
Beautiful
10th Jul 2017 3:55pm
Anonymous
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10th Jul 2017 3:55pm
Anonymous
10th Jul 2017 1:32pm
So much longing in your words, my lovely Dark Angel. Connections that defy time and space with wandering souls...these can be wearying for us. You've created such beautiful imagery here with this piece, as you always do.
So much love for you...
So much love for you...
10th Jul 2017 3:56pm
thank you lovely one for feeling the emotions I was trying to convey in this poem.. I love you lady.. Crim
Anonymous
10th Jul 2017 9:12pm
My Beautiful Brenda, within your words I feel your confliction with the ebb and flow of of what has been your normal for so long...you embrace the light glowing from deep within your soul and yet you miss the darkened presence which typically prevailed...never forget with both dark and light we are blessed with art made of shadows...and there is beauty always found there...beauty in all you have been and beauty in all which is new....
I love you deeply
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you deeply
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
11th Jul 2017 4:03am
thank you my love you see so clearly it is their ebb & flow that is tormenting me.. the light & dark will come together as one within me I just know it.. I love you passionately.. Brenda
10th Jul 2017 10:30pm
such a picture you painted with such a masterful brush. You amaze me, Lady Crim.
11th Jul 2017 4:03am
Anonymous
15th Jul 2017 1:42am
I almost cried because this wrang true in every way with the person I love... thanks for this crimsin
15th Jul 2017 8:32am
thank you for feeling this poem so deeply I hope it get better with your loved one.. love Crim
