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Celestial Tyranny
hang yourself on whispers
i hear your mumbles
& complaints
the grand inquisition
of the celestial council
is in session
for tyranny in this realm
what of your own
you think my eyes blind?
i'm laughing really i am
i will never be held by any court
there is no prison that can contain me
i work from the inside
see my demons at work
they can't be held
by metal & mortar
my fiercest are on the inside
hard at work on the outside
you can't stop the wind
neither can you hold me
you can shake your head in wonder
judge me if you will
i am what i am
the blackest of eyes
are in deep space
ooh turn all the lights on
do you think i don't know where you sleep?
i'm angry but laughing
really you don't want to see me like this
so shut the fuck up
& don't disturb me while i'm working
the grand inquisition
of the celestial council
is in session
for tyranny in this realm
the blackest of eyes
are in deep space
ooh turn all the lights on
do you think i don't know where you sleep?
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Re. Celestial Tyranny
8th Jul 2017 11:33pm
Brenda.. most brilliant, & beautiful.. i really love your visuals, and images.. well done.. love you sister...
Dave
Dave
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9th Jul 2017 3:35am
Re. Celestial Tyranny
8th Jul 2017 11:47pm
Looking and listening to your thoughts put
into words as you perpetrate great mischief
upon your victim from the inside with your
many demons. This posting grabbed me from
the very start.
into words as you perpetrate great mischief
upon your victim from the inside with your
many demons. This posting grabbed me from
the very start.
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Re: Re. Celestial Tyranny
9th Jul 2017 3:36am
Re. Celestial Tyranny
Anonymous
9th Jul 2017 1:15am
Wow, geez chills poetess it's like Freddie Pinhead was reciting this to me fucking fantastic ink very frightening a fucking 10
My ambassador of onyx parables keep them coming 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
My ambassador of onyx parables keep them coming 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Re: Re. Celestial Tyranny
9th Jul 2017 3:37am
Re. Celestial Tyranny
9th Jul 2017 2:04am
All I can say is wow. This piece has a creepy and interesting feel, but I like it. That photo goes quite well with the piece itself. A job well done Crim!
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9th Jul 2017 3:37am
Re. Celestial Tyranny
9th Jul 2017 3:55am
persistent demons rounded up
by council for the defense;
serving justice, Crim...
by council for the defense;
serving justice, Crim...
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9th Jul 2017 4:07am
Re. Celestial Tyranny
Anonymous
9th Jul 2017 5:02am
Amazing Crim.
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Re: Re. Celestial Tyranny
10th Jul 2017 00:22am
Re. Celestial Tyranny
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jul 2017 6:14am
9th Jul 2017 6:13am
Excellent and engaging... I love the rebel tone. Thank you.
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10th Jul 2017 00:22am
Re. Celestial Tyranny
9th Jul 2017 6:17am
The celestial counsel. I love it! The watcher with the black eyes knows your sins. This is great Crim. It has the operatic scale of sci-fi with the darkness of horror.
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Re: Re. Celestial Tyranny
10th Jul 2017 00:23am
Re. Celestial Tyranny
9th Jul 2017 9:51am
guuuuuuuuuurl
remind me to never get on your bad side
it's like you just dropped a molotov cocktail full of hell fire!...
"you can shake your head in wonder
judge me if you will
i am what i am"
^^^^^^^
yes! yes! yes!
aum & afuckingmen!
... bloody loved this, gorgeous one. this is a mantra.
love ya to itty bits
xo
remind me to never get on your bad side
it's like you just dropped a molotov cocktail full of hell fire!...
"you can shake your head in wonder
judge me if you will
i am what i am"
^^^^^^^
yes! yes! yes!
aum & afuckingmen!
... bloody loved this, gorgeous one. this is a mantra.
love ya to itty bits
xo
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Re: Re. Celestial Tyranny
10th Jul 2017 00:24am
thank you beautiful one you always make the blackest of days bright with your comments.. love you lady.. xo Brenda
Re. Celestial Tyranny
Anonymous
9th Jul 2017 1:32pm
And this is another had dropping example of how you became my Dark Angel. The shadowsmoving fearlessly, pacing, through this one are fierce, lovely one. You've given them voice and retained your space. "I am what I am"
So much love for you...
So much love for you...
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Re: Re. Celestial Tyranny
10th Jul 2017 00:26am
thank you lovely one i did give the dark voice in this one was feeling a little rebellious I deeply cherish your thoughts.. love you lady.. Crim
Re: Re. Celestial Tyranny
Anonymous
10th Jul 2017 2:05pm
Well, the auto correct assassins had a field day with my comment, lovely Dark Angel. This is how that comment was SUPPOSED to read... "And this is another JAW dropping example of how you became my Dark Angel. The shadows moving fearlessly, pacing FELT through this one are fierce, lovely one. You've given them voice and retained your space. "I am what I am" So much love for you..." muttering under breath about auto correct...
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Re: Re. Celestial Tyranny
10th Jul 2017 2:39pm
Re. Celestial Tyranny
Anonymous
9th Jul 2017 1:41pm
deep & deeper crim
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10th Jul 2017 00:26am
Re. Celestial Tyranny
9th Jul 2017 4:48pm
darkly, deep drop kick of a poem - kickin ass and takin names - Go you ! :-)
ehugs on their way :-)
ehugs on their way :-)
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10th Jul 2017 00:27am
Re. Celestial Tyranny
9th Jul 2017 6:54pm
This is both chilling and exhilarating with a lot at stake here.. It's fun to picture you standing in defiance of Grand Inquisitor Torquemada, railing against your accusers' ignorance and hypocrisy. Both celestial and sublime!
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Re: Re. Celestial Tyranny
10th Jul 2017 00:28am
thank you dearest Sir Crow was just feeling a little angry here.. just had to let it loose.. love Crim
Re. Celestial Tyranny
9th Jul 2017 7:33pm
Shit! This was fierce!!!! So damn dark and lovely, Crim!! 😘
"the grand inquisition
of the celestial council
is in session
for tyranny in this realm " <<< I did say Fierce, didnt I ?! 😉
"the grand inquisition
of the celestial council
is in session
for tyranny in this realm " <<< I did say Fierce, didnt I ?! 😉
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Re: Re. Celestial Tyranny
10th Jul 2017 00:29am
Re. Celestial Tyranny
10th Jul 2017 9:06am
This is a very intreging piece, I love the building of epiphany, expertly woven to be understood by a reader who reads well. Love it
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Re. Celestial Tyranny
10th Jul 2017 9:06am
This is a very intreging piece, I love the building of epiphany, expertly woven to be understood by a reader who reads well. Love it
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Re: Re. Celestial Tyranny
10th Jul 2017 2:40pm
Re. Celestial Tyranny
Anonymous
10th Jul 2017 7:29pm
My Beautiful Brenda, how I love when your fierce emerges...to see you stand there definitely in knowing all that you are....these lines kicked my ass as I heard them said from your succulent mouth...
"the blackest of eyes
are in deep space
ooh turn all the lights on
do you think i don't know where you sleep?
i'm angry but laughing
really you don't want to see me like this
so shut the fuck up
& don't disturb me while i'm working"
That's my girl! I love you deeply....
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
"the blackest of eyes
are in deep space
ooh turn all the lights on
do you think i don't know where you sleep?
i'm angry but laughing
really you don't want to see me like this
so shut the fuck up
& don't disturb me while i'm working"
That's my girl! I love you deeply....
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. Celestial Tyranny
10th Jul 2017 7:55pm
thank you my love it was just a bit of madness that came pouring out :) I deeply appreciate & cherish your love, thoughts on this write.. I love you deeply.. Brenda
Re. Celestial Tyranny
10th Jul 2017 10:32pm
Visually stimulating, dear Lady. It's always a pleasure to sample your ink.
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Re: Re. Celestial Tyranny
11th Jul 2017 3:57am
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
1st Feb 2019 7:27pm
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1st Feb 2019 7:31pm