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asylum
I'm descendant of a dark race of beings
currently residing in deep outer space
they are cold & calculating in nature
nothing is sacred with them
though they are a highly evolved society
I've been given asylum in this sector
it is still not far enough from their reach
no where is
I was imprisoned for centuries untold
for so long I sent out my S.O.S
before I reached the others telepathically
the natural world is beautiful here
it is a replica of a place I helped create
far away in a different time & place
technology is a wonderful & needed thing
but it is also used to control you
without your knowledge
these dark entities send messages
through the radio, television & even books
meant to brainwash you into their way of thinking
they call it your pacifier
they're a cruel & prejudice society
with a strict hierarchy
any imperfection in a being & they are exterminated
much like Hitler's regime
except they make him seem like the Easter Bunny
there is a galactic war being waged
tyranny will not be tolerated
it will be eradicated with the dark ways
I'm sending out my message
I am a powerful entity in my own right
I've buckled under their weight but was never broken
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 2nd Jul 2017
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2nd Jul 2017 5:36am
Nicely done, cascading viewfinder of tyrannical lobotomy
cenobites nicely referenced
cenobites nicely referenced
2nd Jul 2017 5:53am
Anonymous
2nd Jul 2017 11:13am
nice viewpoint crim
2nd Jul 2017 2:50pm
Anonymous
2nd Jul 2017 11:14am
Interesting perspective Crim
2nd Jul 2017 2:51pm
Anonymous
2nd Jul 2017 2:10pm
Why is it we have to create our own beauty because what we know and where we've been is so stark it's uninhabitable and devoid of warmth and welcome. I'm so very happy you're here growing the seeds of your own environment around you. So beautiful, my lovely Dark Angel. So much love for you...
2nd Jul 2017 2:54pm
lovely one you see so much yes I feel I had to do just that create beauty because where I was from was such a cold place with no loveliness.. love the idea of growing my own seeds.. I deeply cherish your thoughts.. love you lady.. Crim
2nd Jul 2017 2:12pm
I know that you said this place you described was, "currently residing in deep outer space." But as I read it I couldn't help but associate it with America because all the evil things you spoke of takes place here also.
2nd Jul 2017 2:57pm
thank you dearest Jerry while these particular beings have affected us here they are not the only ones who do.. I just have to remember to tap into the beauty that is around us & out there.. love you my friend.. Brenda
2nd Jul 2017 2:28pm
2nd Jul 2017 2:57pm
Anonymous
2nd Jul 2017 8:39pm
My Beautiful Brenda, it is in this ink you show you understand the workings of both sides and respect them...perhaps they at times are cruel and some are exterminated but I feel that is for the ones which don't show respect, this is the very reason you have been given asylum my love...because you have the strength to traverse both sides...
I love you passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
3rd Jul 2017 1:39am
thank you my love you have such a great understanding of things.. you see things I fail to.. yes I do traverse both sides there are lovely parts of their society which I am forgetting.. I love you deeply.. xo Brenda
2nd Jul 2017 8:58pm
You will never break. You are definitely an iron maiden. Excellent ink, Lady Crim.
3rd Jul 2017 1:40am
thank you my Darkest Lord you do this lady great honor with your thoughts.. love Crim
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2017 00:45am
Brenda.. i totally get this.. and am honored that i do.. love this ink, and my brilliant sister..
Dave
Dave
3rd Jul 2017 1:41am
thank you Dave I know you have a deep understanding of these things.. I love you my brother.. love Brenda
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2017 2:02am
This chilled my soul. Well done!!
3rd Jul 2017 2:46am
thank you for such a wonderful comment.. I deeply appreciate your thoughts.. love Crim
3rd Jul 2017 7:34pm
sounds so futuristic but centred in our current world. disappointingly they sound very much like humans or human alien hybrids. I would rather have alien species that were nicer than us :-)
1000 ehugs on their way :-)
1000 ehugs on their way :-)
thank you David there are other beings out there that are of a gentle nature they are at war with the society I described here.. love & hugs Brenda
4th Jul 2017 3:17am
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