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lust & love pages
i don't feel you here
& i'm left empty
with your poetry
& masculinity
you filled my void
devoured the angry bits of me
relieved my ache
i reached for you
as i would the bottle
you intoxicated my senses
smoothed the rough edges
a balm to my sore spots
brought to ecstasy
when you smiled upon me
with your refined favor
then spiraled & fell
when you pulled away one day
i don't reach for you
or the bottle
these days
& my pen has dried
with the tears on my face
my poetry fails to move you
once i crashed upon your shores
with my lust & desire
i've lost my brazen nature
& with it my ability to touch you
i will feel my way back
to the place we began
a poet & a poetess
with a passion so fierce
it burned the pages
within my lines
despite the impossible
there was a you & i
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Re. lust & love pages
28th Jun 2017 1:45pm
nothing as amazing & terrible as loving a poet
bastards
this aches familiarly
xo
bastards
this aches familiarly
xo
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Re: Re. lust & love pages
28th Jun 2017 5:09pm
Re. lust & love pages
28th Jun 2017 1:57pm
Ditto shadoe
Better off with a blue collar caveman with a twinkle in his eye
Better off with a blue collar caveman with a twinkle in his eye
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Re: Re. lust & love pages
28th Jun 2017 5:10pm
thank you dearest Poet that sounds intriguing a blue collar man with a twinkle in his eye yeah I could go for that ;) love you.. xx Brenda
Re. lust & love pages
28th Jun 2017 4:03pm
I would respectfully submit that if your poetry no longer moves somebody then they are already dead - your poetry is always inspiring and moving - I for one would be poorer without it :-)
1000 hugs on their way - David :-)
1000 hugs on their way - David :-)
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Re: Re. lust & love pages
28th Jun 2017 5:12pm
thank you graciously David your comment brought me smiles :) though I think it's a bit of projection on my part.. projecting how I feel about myself.. love & hugs my friend.. xo Brenda
Re. lust & love pages
28th Jun 2017 4:14pm
When you take pen in hand (keyboard) and begin to compose it is like a thunderous, violent thunderstorm coming toward your readers. We are never disappointed.
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Re: Re. lust & love pages
28th Jun 2017 5:13pm
aw thank you dearest Jerry for such a beautiful comment making me beam :) love you my friend.. xo Brenda
Re. lust & love pages
Anonymous
28th Jun 2017 4:22pm
This is heartbreakingly beautiful

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Re: Re. lust & love pages
28th Jun 2017 5:14pm
Re. lust & love pages
28th Jun 2017 9:43pm
Lost in the memories of what was, sadly I know exactly how it feels n Yea, poetesses
can have that same effect, so maybe we should both just become monks n nuns?
lol...
can have that same effect, so maybe we should both just become monks n nuns?
lol...
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Re: Re. lust & love pages
29th Jun 2017 1:33am
thank you Poe yeah I think we've all felt the sting of poetry's kiss with fondness & regret.. love Crim
Re. lust & love pages
28th Jun 2017 10:03pm
..it gets easier. The lust dries and the love slowly fades. ❤
A beautiful ache you've penned, Brenda! 😘
A beautiful ache you've penned, Brenda! 😘
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Re: Re. lust & love pages
29th Jun 2017 1:34am
thank you beautiful Rain I do hope so since I wrote this i've had two dreams about this poet.. love Brenda
Re. lust & love pages
29th Jun 2017 2:12am
lust is a prelude to love;
just when you think you've got him,
he gets on his horse & rides away.
essential, Crim...
just when you think you've got him,
he gets on his horse & rides away.
essential, Crim...
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Re: Re. lust & love pages
29th Jun 2017 2:34am
thank you John really i wouldn't want it any other way a man i can tie down isn't the one i want.. love Crim
Re. lust & love pages
Anonymous
29th Jun 2017 2:33pm
My beautiful Dark Angel, that your poetry no longer moves him speaks more on him than it does you. You are an incredible soul and it's truly his loss. I know these feelings you speak of and will snuggle this one close to my heart. So much love...

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Re: Re. lust & love pages
29th Jun 2017 7:39pm
thank you lovely one for showing me so much love & understanding.. I love you.. xo Crim
Re. lust & love pages
Anonymous
30th Jun 2017 3:09am
My Beautiful Brenda, what was will always remain...inked words and passion forever to be read and with hope, only the pain will fade...but never the love and respect. Each experience contributes to who we have become...and I think you're pretty fucking fabulous...
I love you passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo

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Re: Re. lust & love pages
30th Jun 2017 2:35pm
thank you my love you always see things so clearly & open my mind to things I'd not thought of before.. I think you are fucking fabulous as well.. you gifted me big smiles with your comment :) I love you deeply.. love Brenda
Re. lust & love pages
Anonymous
1st Jul 2017 2:38am
Brenda, beautiful yet heartbreaking.. a poet is lucky to be in your dreams.. too bad, he doesn't see that.. love you my sister..
Dave
Dave

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Re: Re. lust & love pages
1st Jul 2017 12:47pm
thank you Dave for showing me your love on this write.. love you my brother.. Brenda