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Translucent
Translucent comes to mind
Clarity not quite apparent
Your dreams say something
Underbelly of desire
it's a good day for flying
Cloudless skies
Editing thoughts
Waiting for a signal
Left or right ?
Clarity not quite apparent
Your dreams say something
Underbelly of desire
it's a good day for flying
Cloudless skies
Editing thoughts
Waiting for a signal
Left or right ?
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Re. Translucent
Anonymous
26th Jun 2017 2:10pm
I love the word translucent. Don't know why. Much enjoyed this drifting piece. Calm inducing and mellow. Big like

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26th Jun 2017 2:11pm
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26th Jun 2017 2:49pm
Re. Translucent
26th Jun 2017 3:44pm
it is a very good day for flying!
I've always believed that dreams are our subconscious telling us what we really need.
I've always believed that dreams are our subconscious telling us what we really need.
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Re. Translucent
26th Jun 2017 6:34pm
'Editing thoughts' was quite the hook,
A dream-like state, indeed, evoked.
I'll put apparent to post's parent,
That this fine poem left me choked.
A dream-like state, indeed, evoked.
I'll put apparent to post's parent,
That this fine poem left me choked.
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Re. Translucent
26th Jun 2017 10:55pm
Re. Translucent
Anonymous
27th Jun 2017 1:52am
Boss.. simply brilliant..
Dave
Dave

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Re. Translucent
27th Jun 2017 2:33am
Re. Translucent
Anonymous
27th Jun 2017 2:56am
When I was younger I used to spend my time lying in a field flying a kite...my weather up here was perfect for it today...I had found a way to make them twirl figure 8's and reading that line brought me back to when I did such a thing...thank you for the peaceful moment Poe...how about left and right?
Escaped like
- S
xx
Escaped like
- S
xx

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27th Jun 2017 3:47am
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