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The Ramen Place up the Street
I like going there
It's a different twist on Ramen Noodle Soup
The vibe is good
Service is friendly
It's cool and downtown in an uptown locale
The bowl arrives
Spicy as you want or mild
They always get it right
Ramen broth can be salty
Their's is not
Perfectly balanced and hearty
in a delicate way
They make their own noodles
Kale and spiced eggs for color
At the end they present you with a peeled orange
Cut in quarters, eaten with a toothpick
Everything here has float
It's the kind of place that flies under the radar
You want to recommend it
Yet you don't want it to be discovered
Where hoards will flock expecting the miraculous
The soup is good, the zen better
Perfection in my little world
If you went, you might agree
It's a different twist on Ramen Noodle Soup
The vibe is good
Service is friendly
It's cool and downtown in an uptown locale
The bowl arrives
Spicy as you want or mild
They always get it right
Ramen broth can be salty
Their's is not
Perfectly balanced and hearty
in a delicate way
They make their own noodles
Kale and spiced eggs for color
At the end they present you with a peeled orange
Cut in quarters, eaten with a toothpick
Everything here has float
It's the kind of place that flies under the radar
You want to recommend it
Yet you don't want it to be discovered
Where hoards will flock expecting the miraculous
The soup is good, the zen better
Perfection in my little world
If you went, you might agree
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Re. The Ramen Place up the Street
I LOVE homemade ramen! There's a place here called Noodles and Company that's much like what you're describing.
This poem is very well-written, Poet.
Know what I want for lunch!
This poem is very well-written, Poet.
Know what I want for lunch!
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21st Jun 2017 2:16pm
Re. The Ramen Place up the Street
21st Jun 2017 2:31pm
i am seriously loving these pieces! they are precise and lovely and real. which is all one can ask from a good poem. very well done!
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21st Jun 2017 3:31pm
Re. The Ramen Place up the Street
21st Jun 2017 4:42pm
I have to admit I don't know what ramen is - had to google it - so many versions but all look real tasty - so tasty your poem has inspired me to try some - That's a first, inspired to eat by a poem :-)
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22nd Jun 2017 1:06am
If it's done right, you will have a new food to look forward to. I only go to this place. I'm not an expert. Here in NYC people make ramen soup out to be a religious food experience. To me it's colorful soup
Re. The Ramen Place up the Street
21st Jun 2017 6:06pm
those dive, hole in the wall type places sometimes have the best food! or food poisoning
but it's worth the gamble
xx
ML i am loving your truths
but it's worth the gamble
xx
ML i am loving your truths
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22nd Jun 2017 1:07am
this is my new focus. Poems that are slice of life and observation. I think I'm done with fuck and suck for awhile ..... xx
Re. The Ramen Place up the Street
22nd Jun 2017 00:55am
When I was a kid visiting aunt and uncle during summer break, their was a burger place in the litte hick town they lived near that was outstanding! Maybe it was just because I was a kid but that place was always crowded. Good memory
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Re. The Ramen Place up the Street
22nd Jun 2017 00:59am
You gotta love those childhood memories.
Glad this gave you some thoughts about the old days !!
Glad this gave you some thoughts about the old days !!
Re. The Ramen Place up the Street
Anonymous
22nd Jun 2017 6:14pm
My daughter keeps begging me to go to The City with her. If I do, I'm thinking I'll need to hit you up for some pointers. Love ramen
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22nd Jun 2017 10:06pm
Some say it's about the noodles, other say it's the broth I like the spiced egg in concert with the rest Better in winter on a cold blustery day when you need soup comfort
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Anonymous
24th Jun 2017 4:41am
Boss.. big Like..
Dave
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24th Jun 2017 1:47pm