the devil's ballet

I hope so Crim, you've been his puppet for too long...
JJ

thank you JJ I will make through this maze.. love Brenda

This makes me want to jump on a 79' Harley shovel-head and ride off like a mo'fo

Awesome Awesome write as always.

Big loves


B xx

thank you Ben your comment brought me smiles that would be good times :) love Brenda

this coda reads like a grand pas classique,beautiful one... except with you, it actually moves the balllet forward.
at uct we were always told that the first & last thing we will ever perfect as dancers is the plié & i love that you have brought the complexity & simplicity of such a graceful movement herein juxtaposed with these macabre images.
you make me ache for my days  dancing with this haunting poem.
love you lady

thank you graciously beautiful one for showing me love on this haunting ballet I've been performing.. I would have loved to see you dance.. I'm sure it was really something stunning to see.. loved, loved your comment you see the depths of what I am conveying..  love you lady..  xo Brenda

understandable seeing the reality of it all...now I feel it, too tiny dancer

thank you Messier yes it is something when you are confronted with it.. appreciate your thoughts & visits to my pages.. love Crim

Ultimate depraved passion play

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thank you dearest Poet you gave me a smile to start my day with :) love you.. xx Brenda

like the dance of the Black Swan, Crim,
but a dance more beautiful when the strings are cut...

thank you John indeed it is.. love Crim

Keep dancing!

thank you most kindly I will :) welcome to DU.. love Crim

....and  as you curtsey bow to an audience that is chanting, "we want more",....you realize you are free. No more strings to be pulled, no more shackles holding you back and the devil had to exit his ass stage left.  
Rebirth through movement.... love it!😘

thank you lovely Rain you made me laugh with your fierce comment :) love Brenda

Ah Brenda, you won't "i take a bow      
& exist (exit) this stage  
for the last time  
 
You will be back, I firmly believe in reincarnation. See you then.

thank you Jerry yes I believe that too :) deeply appreciate you pointing out my pesky error.. love you.. xo Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda....my love, you will continue to dance for us all...choreographing your own dance steps...just what you have been fighting for...so very proud of you and your continued strength...you lift me up when I am so buried in darkness...honored to have you beside me, you have no idea the impact you have on us all.

I love you madly, deeply my love.

With all my love - Taryn xoxo

thank you my love as I am blessed to have you by my side on this journey.. you pull me out of the darkness as well & when I choose to stay there awhile.. you come in with special visits that reach my heart..  

I love you deeply..  

xo Brenda

I like it a lot!

thank you most kindly.. love Crim

Keep dancing and dare to dream !! Awesome write

thank you dearest Ragnar I will :) love Crim

Your dance is exquisitely yours and yours alone. It's such an honor to be allowed to watch (walk with) you through this journey. That final stanza had me on the edge of my seat audibly uttering "Yes!" Gorgeous, as always, my beautiful Angel. So much love...

thank you lovely one I am so grateful & honored to have you as a companion on this great journey we are on.. love Crim

I dance in my dreams, no strings attached - it's a beautiful feeling of freedom, as was this poem :-)

Love and hugs - David :-)

thank you David oh what a beautiful dream.. love & hugs Brenda

Brenda.. such an emotional ink.. but your ending, to rise above.. that's true hope.. i love you!!!















Dave

thank you Dave yes hope is key.. love you my brother.. xo Brenda

Brand new to this website but already enjoying the few minutes I've spent on here today and your poem caught my attention, it is beautiful work.

thank you & welcome to DU I hope you enjoy your stay some great poets & hearts here..  love Crim