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the path
scared & alone
in the darkness
I feel my way back
to the stones
my feet once knew
fear that I may slip
& fall away into the black
never to regain composure
is something I must endure
I tread lightly
on this treacherous journey
there are devils
wicked in guile
that seek to consume
soul & spirit
silently I trek
so not to disturb
the ancient ones
& summon their wrath
they slumber now
should I stray
they will awaken
bring hell upon my head
they guide me
with well worn markers
that I find my way home
covert in nature
into winding valleys
across bridges not used in years
that are my lifelines
my mantra
live life to the fullest
leave the ghosts behind
I see the light before me
should I make it
never again
will I make darkness
my place of abode
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 18th Jun 2017
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18th Jun 2017 6:11am
18th Jun 2017 7:38am
18th Jun 2017 7:48am
you are stronger than any temptation brenda.
this is such a powerful & necessary write
xoxoxo
i love you & am so proud of you
this is such a powerful & necessary write
xoxoxo
i love you & am so proud of you
18th Jun 2017 8:26am
thank you beautiful one for understanding this poem.. I love you deeply.. xo Brenda
18th Jun 2017 1:48pm
Ah, what a great and positive poem, Brenda. t someone once said . . . Atta boy girl!
18th Jun 2017 2:32pm
thank you Jerry if you saw my face you would see the big smile on it :) love Brenda
Anonymous
19th Jun 2017 00:27am
My Beautiful Brenda, any path you choose is the right one...it has been fated and you face whatever lies before you as you walk it...with determination and conviction...
I love you passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
19th Jun 2017 00:59am
thank you my love you always uplift with your beautiful comments.. I am determined to walk a higher path with slippery stones but with far more tranquil vistas.. I love you deeply.. xo Brenda
Anonymous
19th Jun 2017 10:19am
LOVE THIS
20th Jun 2017 1:46am
Anonymous
19th Jun 2017 1:46pm
My lovely Angel, I love the image you've placed in my mind with your words of a path leading to light. I'll be holding on to this one for darker days. So much love...
20th Jun 2017 1:47am
thank you lovely one despite the dark of this write I needed for myself a vision of a path of light happy you saw that too :) love Crim
20th Jun 2017 6:44pm
I straddle between light and dark and I would suggest you do too. Having said that falling off is a constant risk - It's odd, when I fall of it is always into darkness - life is strange
Excellent ink - I liked it a lot :-)
Excellent ink - I liked it a lot :-)
22nd Jun 2017 5:01pm
thank you David great advise it just the falling into darkness again that frightens me though it does happen.. love & hugs Brenda
20th Jun 2017 9:15pm
You have a dark joie de vivre Crim and I'm glad you're keeping the ghosts at bay. "Live life to the fullest" is the most inspiring of mantras. "Don't look back" might be another. Excellent work Lady!
22nd Jun 2017 5:11pm
24th Jun 2017 2:57am
Brenda.. such a beautiful ink.. i know you'll choose the best path.. i love you..
Dave
Dave
25th Jun 2017 00:49am
