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Our Atlantic
I question the time I stay there,
the place where my soul becomes a sea.
The deep blue is limitless,
the majestic and mysterious me.
Hearts are intimate and tranquil you'll find,
but unstable and crashing is the mind.
Wondrous and daring, it teaches us to grow.
The ominous waves we must row, we must row.
the place where my soul becomes a sea.
The deep blue is limitless,
the majestic and mysterious me.
Hearts are intimate and tranquil you'll find,
but unstable and crashing is the mind.
Wondrous and daring, it teaches us to grow.
The ominous waves we must row, we must row.
Published 13th Jun 2017
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13th Jun 2017 8:02pm
17th Jun 2017 3:28am
What a deep and beautifully worded poem! This reminds me of so many times in my life- important introspection, hard times where I had to keep moving on, the art of processing trauma and joy, the ebb and flow of healing and growing. What a great poem about life and the self and rhythm of the inner monologues each person goes through.
20th Jun 2017 00:09am
Thanks sister. I had not written in a few weeks- a little case of writers block. And then it came to me.
24th Jun 2017 1:14am
"Hearts are intimate and tranquil you'll find,
but unstable and crashing is the mind."
Truer words never written. Find thy safe haven, madame.
but unstable and crashing is the mind."
Truer words never written. Find thy safe haven, madame.
12th Jul 2017 5:01am
Brilliant piece of poetry...
"The deep blue is limitless,
the majestic and mysterious me"
Adore those lines.
~anonshadow
"The deep blue is limitless,
the majestic and mysterious me"
Adore those lines.
~anonshadow
14th Jul 2017 9:53pm
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