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Shape of Me
My sweet lover wants to see me dance
Beg with his cute face
I can’t even slightly refuse
Promise to practice
And show him a strip dance
By the edge of mattress
Tilt his head, and cross his legs
His fist is under his chin
With a fondly express
Stare and gaze
Want to see me through
The music I play Shape of You
To show off all I can do
Along with the strong beats
I can’t help but stamp my feet
Move my arms and shake my breasts
In a flash
I stretch out my fists to knock him down
“Are you a boxer?” he made a frown
And teased me, “Bring it on!"
Hey, it’s kind of fun
To be silly and fool around
Before the sexual moment has begun
To see a nude boxer and my true color
It’s time to remove my sheer silk chiffon
Don’t be shy to strip me down
Come stand behind me
Wiggle, wriggle and waggle
Jiggle with me
When your chest sticks to my head
Your hands embrace my breasts
Let’s zigzag with my panting breath
As you hold up my plump butt
Converge and immerge
To integrate our flesh
As two poles of magnets
While dancing
All of you and all of me
Pull and push, pull and push
Passionately and passionately
With our heavenly and heavenly ecstasy
Beg with his cute face
I can’t even slightly refuse
Promise to practice
And show him a strip dance
By the edge of mattress
Tilt his head, and cross his legs
His fist is under his chin
With a fondly express
Stare and gaze
Want to see me through
The music I play Shape of You
To show off all I can do
Along with the strong beats
I can’t help but stamp my feet
Move my arms and shake my breasts
In a flash
I stretch out my fists to knock him down
“Are you a boxer?” he made a frown
And teased me, “Bring it on!"
Hey, it’s kind of fun
To be silly and fool around
Before the sexual moment has begun
To see a nude boxer and my true color
It’s time to remove my sheer silk chiffon
Don’t be shy to strip me down
Come stand behind me
Wiggle, wriggle and waggle
Jiggle with me
When your chest sticks to my head
Your hands embrace my breasts
Let’s zigzag with my panting breath
As you hold up my plump butt
Converge and immerge
To integrate our flesh
As two poles of magnets
While dancing
All of you and all of me
Pull and push, pull and push
Passionately and passionately
With our heavenly and heavenly ecstasy
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Re. Shape of Me
Anonymous
10th Jun 2017 7:15pm
Beautiful
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10th Jun 2017 7:34pm
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11th Jun 2017 8:09am
My dear friend, thank you so much for visiting me and give me the nice comment. Glad you liked it. RoseJasmine
Re. Shape of Me
11th Jun 2017 2:01am
Re: Re. Shape of Me
Hi Jazz, thank you so much for sharing your thought. Love Dance is a beautiful song. Glad mine reminded you of something nice.
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
Re. Shape of Me
11th Jun 2017 11:32am
WOW...did not SEE this comin!! lol I'm so proud of you for bravely expressing your erotic side! Yes it had a light playfulness to it, but I'm sure once the joining of flesh occurred, all that playin was replaced with carnal hunger... Mmmmmmm, really liked it my dear! :)
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Thank you so so much for sharing your thoughts. They are precious to me. Yes. it's part of me... the erotic side. Hope it is still beautiful. Glad you liked it.
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
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11th Jun 2017 2:22pm
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11th Jun 2017 5:41pm
Re. Shape of Me
11th Jun 2017 12:27pm
What a pleasant surprise to come upon your writings. I was swaying to the beat of the syntax with desire. Thanks for sharing your talent. You have a new fan. Oral
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11th Jun 2017 5:21pm
Thank you so much for being my new fan, and thanks for sharing the nice comment. Hope I have depicted all the feelings I wanted to describe. Glad you thought it "a pleasant surprise". RoseJasmine
Re. Shape of Me
12th Jun 2017 3:53am
YOU are a but
slim not dim
and see who and how many wanna cling
what if again too does join the ring
sting sting ring and ring
till you bare
all your white rosyiax skin
slim not dim
and see who and how many wanna cling
what if again too does join the ring
sting sting ring and ring
till you bare
all your white rosyiax skin
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Re: Re. Shape of Me
13th Jun 2017 3:25am
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and giving your support. RoseJasmine
Re. Shape of Me
13th Jun 2017 11:39am
all & all, & all in all;
it's in the pull. & the push.
superior choreography...
it's in the pull. & the push.
superior choreography...
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Re: Re. Shape of Me
13th Jun 2017 4:27pm
Thank you so much for visiting me and sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it. Glad you thought it superior choreography.
Re: Re. Shape of Me
21st Jul 2017 2:56pm
Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. Really appreciate your comment. RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. Shape of Me
16th Aug 2017 2:43pm
Thank you Danigirl, for the read and the nice comment. Glad you like it. Really appreciate! RoseJasmine
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22nd Aug 2017 8:59am
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22nd Aug 2017 9:13am
Thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts. Glad you like it. RoseJasmine
Re: Re. Shape of Me
3rd Sep 2017 1:53pm
Hi Neo, nice to meet you here. Thank you for reading my poem. Glad you like it. I did try to make it sensual and fun......Really appreciate your support. RoseJasmine
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5th Sep 2017 4:05pm
Hey Danny, glad to have your nice comment. Thank you so much. And welcome to DU. RoseJasmine
Re. Shape of Me
1st Apr 2018 6:14pm
This makes me want to ask my wife to dance for me.
this puts us readers in a playful mood i feel.
if not exotic dancing i'll settle for ballroom dancing lol.
great emotions conveyed here.
this puts us readers in a playful mood i feel.
if not exotic dancing i'll settle for ballroom dancing lol.
great emotions conveyed here.
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Re: Re. Shape of Me
1st Apr 2018 6:44pm
I believe it would be super sensual to have her dance for you. Don't hesitate! Just do it! You would enjoy each other very much!
Dear Samael, thank you so much for the read and commenting.
much love
RoseJasmine
Dear Samael, thank you so much for the read and commenting.
much love
RoseJasmine