Petal Of Life

ahh so very beautiful Tim like a living dream..

love Brenda

Thanks so much Brenda

There is a haunting beauty about your words here, Tim. Like a teardrop on a rose petal.

Very beautiful.. a holding on

NICE !!

A feast for the senses,
with a sense of mystery beneath.

Nicely done...

JusT, you are truly a spectacle in your own jar, yes that's where i want  
to put you, on my nightstand and watch you glow, jus joking sweetie lol  
 
now on to this moving piece..  
 
to me, they're supposed to be like odd sculpted driftwood,  
i love memories that are meant for two.. my philosophy is :  
what is the meaning of intimacy if others have the same as you?  
but here you enunciate the concept of those that are "distinct"  
and created just for you  
 
"Drifts  
  amidst the seashore  
  floating    
  a cherished memory "  
 
...................  
I don't know why, but this gave me sight  
of someone covered, protected and carried  
 tightly close to the abdomen and heart, as  
if a  letter held by an inner pocket  
 
"Crumbled and close  
  in creased palms  
  crimson silk  
  on weathered cheeks"  
 
..........................  
the sweetness of karma, because she do have  
a gentle fair side as well, this made me smile  
and blush  
 
"Scents    
   of everlasting  
   reaching out and  
   coming back to get me"  
 
.................................  
speaks for every quiet action, that cannot be created  
in the image of words  
 
"Petals  
   life holding on  
   a heartbeat  
   you're a part of me"  
.....  
 
subtle heartbeats were heard while i read this one.  
 
beautiful does not compensate  
 
 
 
 

Amazing you and your poems, my dear!