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Quietly I Cried Out II
The tender eyes
Seeking refuge
In the tears of others
Amongst the tall pines
I lay beside them
'Neath
Cummings shyest metaphor
Engraved in solitude
Destiny can seem fickle
But I suppose that's mostly
Me
The fragile ego
The thin nerves
The tranquility of embrace
The fully natural state
There is a price to be paid
The thrill is real
The luscious rush
Of exuberant adrenaline
I cannot be bothered
Quietly I cried out
Hardly in agony
Hardly in peril
Wholly succumbed
To my own self
The gaze dissapeared
The world was silent
My ghost appeared.
Seeking refuge
In the tears of others
Amongst the tall pines
I lay beside them
'Neath
Cummings shyest metaphor
Engraved in solitude
Destiny can seem fickle
But I suppose that's mostly
Me
The fragile ego
The thin nerves
The tranquility of embrace
The fully natural state
There is a price to be paid
The thrill is real
The luscious rush
Of exuberant adrenaline
I cannot be bothered
Quietly I cried out
Hardly in agony
Hardly in peril
Wholly succumbed
To my own self
The gaze dissapeared
The world was silent
My ghost appeared.
Published 25th May 2017
| Edited 23rd Jun 2017
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26th May 2017 1:34am
solitude is such when you see the minutest details around you...with nature you are yourself to your core:) good read, Anonshadow.
26th May 2017 7:16am
That is very true, Grace. Thank you for stopping by, really appreciate it! ~anonshadow
23rd Jun 2017 9:30pm
"The tranquility of embrace
The fully natural state
There is a price to be paid"
This is the real poet attempting the escape, LET THEM LIVE! Beautiful and creative
The fully natural state
There is a price to be paid"
This is the real poet attempting the escape, LET THEM LIVE! Beautiful and creative
24th Jun 2017 4:54am
Thank you for those kind words, I am very glad you enjoyed my piece!:) ~anonshadow
