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Red Lip Rose
Honestly, my red lip rose has been waiting so long.
Don’t be hesitating, it’s time for your exploration,
Along with our desire and massive passion.
Let me make you fly to the heavenly destination,
The subtle movement from your finger touch,
Make me out of mind and feel dizzy.
My lover, it’s time to search for your sensibility.
Move off the sheer lingerie to reveal my curvy body,
Start a journey with the tips of my perky breasts,
To feel the plumpness by sucking my juicy nipples,
As I moan from the sexual caress,
Then you, squeeze them harder to release my sense,
Harmonize the sucks and squeezes with my harmonious signs,
Until I can’t wait to look for yours.
My lover, it’s time to sing with my gasps of excitement.
Let me feel your heart beat,
Let me smell the fragrance of your sweat,
From every pore of your masculinity.
When the strokes move up and down on my back,
And fall to the curviest part above my butt,
Rub my waist and stomach,
Then lower down my panties,
Let your lips kiss my red lip rose, and
Your tongue opens the gate,
Which is guarding my most precious secret,
It always hides from others but your sight.
My lover, it’s time to pluck the petals of my red lip rose.
To taste its softness and tenderness,
To sip the sweet nectar with your lips,
It’s filling up to satisfy your hunger,
And for painless love during the exploration.
Don’t be rushed to enter the gate,
Hold my butt and stroke it harder,
The most sensitive spot to start the ritual.
Oh, the trembling bliss I have been eager for,
As your special part touches the red petals,
Along comes with the thrusting deepen in,
My body awakens, and gets so hungry to embrace yours.
How deep it is, and how deep our pleasure.
My lover, it’s time to enjoy my liquid fire.
Let me wrap up your engorged cock,
With my warm moisture velvet cloak.
As yours is stirring inside my vagina,
All along the pain and the joy,
The ties from mutual caress go higher,
I surrender and give up my demure mask.
My lover, can you see?
My tear drops fall to the pillow, for
The overwhelming ecstasy drowns all over.
My lover, it’s time to harmonize with my panting breath.
Enjoy the faster and deeper,
Through come and go, back and forth,
Let’s get to the highest tip,
Cum as we give the last push,
The exploration as you ejaculate I feel,
Make strong vibrations deep inside.
It seems first and last forever-----
The entwined flesh, tangled, twisted, and melted,
“Stay inside me!” I whispered,
Have to hold me tight through the night.
For tomorrow, you’ll leave,
Don’t know when we’ll once again, make love.
Don’t be hesitating, it’s time for your exploration,
Along with our desire and massive passion.
Let me make you fly to the heavenly destination,
The subtle movement from your finger touch,
Make me out of mind and feel dizzy.
My lover, it’s time to search for your sensibility.
Move off the sheer lingerie to reveal my curvy body,
Start a journey with the tips of my perky breasts,
To feel the plumpness by sucking my juicy nipples,
As I moan from the sexual caress,
Then you, squeeze them harder to release my sense,
Harmonize the sucks and squeezes with my harmonious signs,
Until I can’t wait to look for yours.
My lover, it’s time to sing with my gasps of excitement.
Let me feel your heart beat,
Let me smell the fragrance of your sweat,
From every pore of your masculinity.
When the strokes move up and down on my back,
And fall to the curviest part above my butt,
Rub my waist and stomach,
Then lower down my panties,
Let your lips kiss my red lip rose, and
Your tongue opens the gate,
Which is guarding my most precious secret,
It always hides from others but your sight.
My lover, it’s time to pluck the petals of my red lip rose.
To taste its softness and tenderness,
To sip the sweet nectar with your lips,
It’s filling up to satisfy your hunger,
And for painless love during the exploration.
Don’t be rushed to enter the gate,
Hold my butt and stroke it harder,
The most sensitive spot to start the ritual.
Oh, the trembling bliss I have been eager for,
As your special part touches the red petals,
Along comes with the thrusting deepen in,
My body awakens, and gets so hungry to embrace yours.
How deep it is, and how deep our pleasure.
My lover, it’s time to enjoy my liquid fire.
Let me wrap up your engorged cock,
With my warm moisture velvet cloak.
As yours is stirring inside my vagina,
All along the pain and the joy,
The ties from mutual caress go higher,
I surrender and give up my demure mask.
My lover, can you see?
My tear drops fall to the pillow, for
The overwhelming ecstasy drowns all over.
My lover, it’s time to harmonize with my panting breath.
Enjoy the faster and deeper,
Through come and go, back and forth,
Let’s get to the highest tip,
Cum as we give the last push,
The exploration as you ejaculate I feel,
Make strong vibrations deep inside.
It seems first and last forever-----
The entwined flesh, tangled, twisted, and melted,
“Stay inside me!” I whispered,
Have to hold me tight through the night.
For tomorrow, you’ll leave,
Don’t know when we’ll once again, make love.
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Re. Red Lip Rose
17th May 2017 3:49pm
an epic piece of erotica - the descriptions and imagery are impossible to escape from. A picture painted with words - excellent ink :-)
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18th May 2017 1:09pm
Thank you so much for your comment and for sharing your thoughts. Glad you thought it is an epic piece. I tried to write with my soul to make my first poem look good. Hope I made it.
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Anonymous
17th May 2017 7:47pm
Epic indeed !! Wow !!
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Thanks for wowing it. You truely encouraged me to write my next one. Glad you liked it.
Re. Red Lip Rose
18th May 2017 12:57pm
The intensity of want and need heated more n more with each line, building an unquenchable thirst for more n more!!!
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18th May 2017 1:23pm
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. Your comment is precious to me because you pointed out what I wanted to express.
Re. Red Lip Rose
28th May 2017 11:58am
A rare and fresh talent, you are indeed. Thanks for sharing a well-written piece of engaging erotic verse. Look forward to more from your creative soul.
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28th May 2017 3:08pm
Hi, my dear friend. Thank you so much for giving me such a nice comment. I will try to write more. Even though English is my second language, I will do my best. Like writing English peoms so much. Thank you again for encouraging me.
Re. Red Lip Rose
1st Jun 2017 4:38pm
I think ur a virgin belle
about to start guys rolling swi.....
nowread mine more
about to start guys rolling swi.....
nowread mine more
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Hi, Again. I did read some of your poems, and am thinking what to comment. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and "nice" critique. Wondering why you thought I was a virgin. Maybe haha. Thank you "again".
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Thank you for visiting me again and sharing some thoughts, even though this reading is very erotic. Expect to read your nice poems.
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10th Jul 2017 3:21pm
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11th Jul 2017 2:47am
Thank you so much for reading my poem and giving a nice comment. And nice to meet you here. RoseJasmine
Re. Red Lip Rose
15th Jul 2017 12:19pm
So vivid, so real, this one is written to change they way the reader is breathing. The sensuality of foreplay, and final culmination written masterly to bring love making next only to niravana. I was not reading the poems, seems like watching it live, two passionate lover making the perfect love.
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15th Jul 2017 4:43pm
Hi Ronnie, thank you so much for spending time reading my poem and putting it into your reading list. Your thoughts are intimate to my soul. Glad to know what you saw through reading my poem. RoseJasmine
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3rd Aug 2017 5:30am
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3rd Aug 2017 12:00pm
Thank you QuietusQuill, for reading my poem and the RL adding. Glad you like it! Truly appreciate your support! RoseJasmine
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28th Aug 2017 12:40pm
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28th Aug 2017 1:14pm
Hey debug, thank you so much for stopping by and leaving such a nice comment. I tried and hope it made some sense. Really appreciate your support. RoseJasmine
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Hey Rose, its beautiful expression of feelings so intense could make me feel the heat grow through my spine along through the rocky hardness till the tip all out to burst out like a fountain.
Tantric expression culminating into the universal union
Keep it up i read it again and again.
Tantric expression culminating into the universal union
Keep it up i read it again and again.
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7th Nov 2017 8:02am
Thank you Shan for the nice comment. It's my first write, and a bit lack of skills. Glad you can feel it. Hope you can post yours soon.
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
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7th Nov 2017 8:08am
yes of course i shall put up mine too here soon.
although have read a lot but the one which can elevate the feelings in me is urs beautiful poem, it narrowed the distance and united the two souls together experiencing the wonderful feelings and again and again the rising waves of passion.
Keep it up and look forward to much more from u
although have read a lot but the one which can elevate the feelings in me is urs beautiful poem, it narrowed the distance and united the two souls together experiencing the wonderful feelings and again and again the rising waves of passion.
Keep it up and look forward to much more from u
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7th Nov 2017 8:46am
Thank you so much for the kind words. Your encouragement means a lot to me.
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
Re. Red Lip Rose
2nd Dec 2017 2:27am
totally epic, loved it! so well written i love how you started each stanza with "my lover" it gave it a sweetness, and a full heartedness
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2nd Dec 2017 2:44am
Thank you so so much for commenting on almost all my poems. Appreciate your support mariellewrites.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Re. Red Lip Rose
15th Dec 2017 7:29pm
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16th Dec 2017 00:21am
Awww which lips did you talk about in your poem? It's funny that I wrote something similar before, but I think we talked about different things.
Thank you for the nice comment.
much love RoseJasmine
Thank you for the nice comment.
much love RoseJasmine
Re. Red Lip Rose
1st Apr 2018 6:10pm
Wonderful Love and erotic poem.
very relatable and sensual write RoseJasmine
excellent length and detail on this piece.
delicate to the touch.
very relatable and sensual write RoseJasmine
excellent length and detail on this piece.
delicate to the touch.
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1st Apr 2018 6:37pm
Dear Samael, thank you so much for discovering this my oldest poem and sharing kind thought. And I am honored to have your RL add. You never know how much I appreciate it.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
Re. Red Lip Rose
7th Apr 2020 4:28pm
Such a steamy and hot piece
Is Taiwan just like the rest of the world?
Horny
You've answered that question clearly for me
I'm not surprised though
Everyone loves doing it
Is Taiwan just like the rest of the world?
Horny
You've answered that question clearly for me
I'm not surprised though
Everyone loves doing it
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10th Apr 2020 1:50am