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With Wings
Clair de Lune filters
with wings
through graceful waves of air
in every raindrop ping
creating our symphony
spin me a room
weave me a rainbow
be my shining diamond
always holding me near
play me, persuade me
Emerge in the window to my heart
holding strong same beliefs
pulling pirouetted dreams
a duet of two
roses blooming
spin me a picture
paint me a vivid view
raise me from rags to riches
never throw me away
lift me, kiss me
Come dance with me
with wings
through graceful waves of air
in every raindrop ping
creating our symphony
spin me a room
weave me a rainbow
be my shining diamond
always holding me near
play me, persuade me
Emerge in the window to my heart
holding strong same beliefs
pulling pirouetted dreams
a duet of two
roses blooming
spin me a picture
paint me a vivid view
raise me from rags to riches
never throw me away
lift me, kiss me
Come dance with me
Written by
JusTim_
Published 10th May 2017
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Re. With Wings
Anonymous
10th May 2017 9:08pm
As soon as I saw the first line I started playing the song. The perfect backdrop for such beautiful words. What lady could say no to such a dance partner? Beautifully and passionately written, Tim
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10th May 2017 9:16pm
Re. With Wings
11th May 2017 3:31am
Re. With Wings
11th May 2017 3:42am
Romantic and mesmerizing . The flow is captivating and it's a beautiful piece!
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13th May 2017 8:12pm
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13th May 2017 8:13pm
Re. With Wings
12th May 2017 2:21pm
Congratulations! This poem has been nominated for Deep Underground Poetry's Featured Poem of the Month Competition. You may view the nomination at the link below, and will be notified if selected.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9621/30/#393759
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9621/30/#393759
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!
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Re. With Wings
14th May 2017 9:24am
I saw this in the competition...
Such a beautiful poem, Tim! The imagery is (again) stunning...
"spin me a room
weave me a rainbow" > amazing phrasing!
Such a beautiful poem, Tim! The imagery is (again) stunning...
"spin me a room
weave me a rainbow" > amazing phrasing!
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