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yes! she's alive
and she has proven
she's got a life
from under a boulder
she proved she can breathe
her proof of free will
is now complete
at some point in future
she will look back
she did right? hell yeah
will pat her own back
she's got a life
from under a boulder
she proved she can breathe
her proof of free will
is now complete
at some point in future
she will look back
she did right? hell yeah
will pat her own back
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Re. yes! she's alive
27th Apr 2017 11:42pm
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28th Apr 2017 00:23am
Indeed and in deed Josh! I welcome your presence and insight. Yes, it's a good news indeed, in the long run probably the best of the good news. She did it.
Re. yes! she's alive
28th Apr 2017 2:19am
to feel alive is not always an easy thing to do, I am not even sure that somebody who has proof they have a life actually feels alive - I love the deliberate ambiguity here - leaves the reader room to think :-)
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"to feel alive is not always an easy thing to do, I am not even sure that somebody who has proof they have a life actually feels alive"
What a beautiful poem, I couldn't have said it better in a million years. Dave, I welcome your presence with big smile on my face.
You have summed it up better than I could ever. What's a poem if it doesn't move the reader's imagination? Elated I am indeed on seeing you here and in your bull's Eye feedback! ☺
Warm regards
KDAmB
What a beautiful poem, I couldn't have said it better in a million years. Dave, I welcome your presence with big smile on my face.
You have summed it up better than I could ever. What's a poem if it doesn't move the reader's imagination? Elated I am indeed on seeing you here and in your bull's Eye feedback! ☺
Warm regards
KDAmB
Re. yes! she's alive
28th Apr 2017 7:07am
Great piece my brother. I am so glad she's alive! This poem is deep in it's beauty and is a great celebration of life, the gift of being alive. We can never take it for granted for one day we all pass, we never know when that day shall arrive. This did a good job of reminding me that. Thank you for sharing it!
~anonshadow👻
~anonshadow👻
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Re: Re. yes! she's alive
29th Apr 2017 1:57am
Welcome My Brother!!
So am I glad that she's done the right thing. You hit the nail on its head, life is not just survival life is living and she's given the stress a big kick in the balls. Glad I am the scribble spoke to you my brother. I thank you sincerely for the visit and generous appreciation.
kind regards
KDAmB
So am I glad that she's done the right thing. You hit the nail on its head, life is not just survival life is living and she's given the stress a big kick in the balls. Glad I am the scribble spoke to you my brother. I thank you sincerely for the visit and generous appreciation.
kind regards
KDAmB
Re. yes! she's alive
29th Apr 2017 2:20am
Yes, she is :-)
Thank you for this beautiful and uplifting write... it was exactly what I needed to read...
Thank you for this beautiful and uplifting write... it was exactly what I needed to read...
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Re: Re. yes! she's alive
29th Apr 2017 4:03am
Welcome Dear Friend Duende!
Thank You for your kind appreciation of the scribble and your visit. Glad indeed that you liked it!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Thank You for your kind appreciation of the scribble and your visit. Glad indeed that you liked it!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. yes! she's alive
29th Apr 2017 4:04am
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29th Apr 2017 4:09am
Welcome dear Friend Brenda!
glad I am indeed to have your presence and for the fact it could convey some meaning! I thank you for your presence here and such kind words.
regards
KDAmB
glad I am indeed to have your presence and for the fact it could convey some meaning! I thank you for your presence here and such kind words.
regards
KDAmB
Re. yes! she's alive
29th Apr 2017 8:52am
Aw.. beautifully upbeat n inspirational in ur own style i am getting to know..yes, she ought to be in josh n alive very much..n yes, as a reflex any soulful n intelligent poet would spell- u sau these lines very quick n impressive, " she did right?" ..
S2 wholly is overwhelmingly put..liked tgat esp.
tq fr the share :)
S2 wholly is overwhelmingly put..liked tgat esp.
tq fr the share :)
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Welcome dear respected friend! :-)
yes she is full of life and spirit. A lively person indeed but not without her tender and sensitive side.
your simply awesome feedback left me with a wide grin Uma. Thanks a million for the same!!
Appreciate immensely your deep insight and such generous appreciation! Thanks once again dear friend!
warm regards
KDAmB
िन्दगी हर्गिज़ न मस्- अला लिक्खून
जोश मे ना लिखून तो क्या लिक्खून
Re. yes! she's alive
30th Apr 2017 1:41am
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30th Apr 2017 1:43am
Welcome and Thank You my brother!
yes! amazing it will be in not too distant future! I'm sure! Thank you once again for the visit and kind feedback bro!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
yes! amazing it will be in not too distant future! I'm sure! Thank you once again for the visit and kind feedback bro!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. yes! she's alive
1st Jun 2017 5:33pm
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24th Jun 2017 1:20pm
Welcome and Thank You Zazz! many thanks for the visit and appreciation. Cheers! KDAmB