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Ancient Murmurs
I'm in a lonesome place
I talk to the sea
it stays hushed & silent
the waves don't utter their secrets
the sea spray
kisses my skin
& says in time my friend
you will one day have the key
to unlock my wisdom
the wind blows across my face
whips my hair about
I can't decipher it's bold language
it's foreign to me
I'm on the steps of change
they lead up or down
I'm on a landing
not knowing which way to go
a wise man would say
go up if you wish to reach the summit
I've already beheld
the bowels of the Earth
the mountains lay witness
to all that unfolds
within nature & mankind
I want my blindfold removed
to decode the ancient murmurs
the primal stirrings within me
to understand
& so it is said
so shall it be
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 24th Apr 2017
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24th Apr 2017 3:30pm
24th Apr 2017 7:58pm
thank you lovely lady indeed I will.. the sea, wind & mountains will someday tell me their secrets if I can quiet myself & listen.. love Brenda
24th Apr 2017 3:46pm
24th Apr 2017 7:58pm
24th Apr 2017 4:01pm
The secrets of what nature bares, always reveals itself in the strangest ways.
So shall it be .... love the ending
So shall it be .... love the ending
24th Apr 2017 7:59pm
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Anonymous
24th Apr 2017 8:24pm
My pretty lady, you have utterly, undoubtingly grown your words within and they are a sight for my eye to see.
hugs and love, like i love this
hugs and love, like i love this
24th Apr 2017 10:32pm
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25th Apr 2017 1:43pm
The bowels of the earth are so last year, you can't beat the mountain tops :-)
fabulous :-)
fabulous :-)
26th Apr 2017 8:41pm
Anonymous
25th Apr 2017 1:57pm
The first time I met the ocean I was terrified. It was so vast and I'm so small. But in the end, that's the very thing that kept drawing me back. Listening to the whisper of the water and just touching something so ancient. It comforts me. I'm far away from any ocean now. This is an incredibly beautiful write, dark angel. I shall keep it close
26th Apr 2017 8:42pm
thank you lovely one the ocean like you is my favorite place to be on Earth.. love Crim
Anonymous
27th Apr 2017 00:45am
Brenda.. truly brilliant, as always love you..
Dave
Dave
Anonymous
12th May 2017 5:47am
I, like you My Beautiful, has a brain which fights to remain quiet...I have been learning over the last several years and I am grateful for that...so many answers have arrived and shown me the way to understand and set many pains free. It shall be ...just as you said for you as well.
I love you deeply lovely one!
Love Taryn xoxo
I love you deeply lovely one!
Love Taryn xoxo
12th May 2017 11:35am
thank you lovely one for embracing and understanding this write I only hope I can find that quiet place again.. I love you :) xo Brenda
