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Farewell My Love
Tears
Roll
Gently
My heart cries
As it dies once more
My arms go limp as you break free
Standing alone with memories and a broken heart
I am lost, a pauper without a grave, doing time waiting for Him to call me home
Roll
Gently
My heart cries
As it dies once more
My arms go limp as you break free
Standing alone with memories and a broken heart
I am lost, a pauper without a grave, doing time waiting for Him to call me home
Published 14th Apr 2017
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Anonymous
14th Apr 2017 2:32pm
The imagery your words paint here are clear and incredibly heartbreaking. If you need hugs...
14th Apr 2017 7:25pm
Anonymous
14th Apr 2017 3:35pm
This types of poetry is best when they're short and to the point.
Perfect length with just the right words and emotions conveyed.
Perfect length with just the right words and emotions conveyed.
14th Apr 2017 7:25pm
14th Apr 2017 4:53pm
Tim I felt the great loss of love in this write and it pains me.. hugs beautiful soul..
love Crim
love Crim
14th Apr 2017 7:27pm
14th Apr 2017 10:22pm
I've said this to You before and I apologize...But truly simplicity in poetry is by far the most effective when it comes to conveying emotion...A tender Write Tim!!!
