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Celeste
The clouds flow brazen with the wind of sighs
To constant seek the one who calls for them
By names that last beyond their perishing
And leaves their seasons scented with the earth
While far below the life of air-bound song
I stand before the dawn with covered eyes
To open mouth to imitate her creed
In hopes the goddess of the morning rise
Will cast upon, assuage this subject, bowed
And give me peace that she will soon return.
April 7 ( NaPoWriMo 2017 )
Published 7th Apr 2017
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7th Apr 2017 12:21pm
By names that last beyond their perishing
And leaves their seasons scented with the earth
While far below the life of air-bound song
I stand before the dawn with covered eyes
These lines affect my heart the way that Lorca's verse does...
I really adore this poem!
And leaves their seasons scented with the earth
While far below the life of air-bound song
I stand before the dawn with covered eyes
These lines affect my heart the way that Lorca's verse does...
I really adore this poem!
7th Apr 2017 12:26pm
I'm terribly honored, dear tommycat - and thank you for placing it on your list.
7th Apr 2017 12:28pm
7th Apr 2017 12:35pm
*moist-eyed as she smiles...* Thank you so much, my most endless friend. :)
7th Apr 2017 3:41pm
Wonderful way to evoke the sunrise, Jaded One. I felt like I was watching your ritual from the dense forest, undetected.
8th Apr 2017 5:28am
8th Apr 2017 11:32am
sun arise, that cast its glory
upon the Celestine environs;
classic verses in the early light...
upon the Celestine environs;
classic verses in the early light...
8th Apr 2017 2:46pm
