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Revival

Dear Brothers & Sisters, please hear me.      
I know in this world of today      
Confusion abounds in one's journey;      
There's no peace of mind anyway.      
     
So tell me, please, my fellow sinners      
As I stand here before you right now      
On top of my '58 Chevy,      
Is there anything better I vow?      
     
Hell no!  I mean, friends, look no further.      
The future of faith is upon us      
To take you to your destination,      
And it's made in the U.S. of A.!      
     
She's better than ever a woman,      
Ocean coral with leather to match.      
White sidewalls like velveteen slippers,      
And she purrs like a white Persian cat.      
     
But this girl’s an All-American,      
A pure native Detroit, M.I.      
Custom-built to span all of God's country      
Like the Star-Spangled Banner we cry!      
     
There's millions who'd die to swap places,      
To have a life like you and me.      
The heartland they wish they'd been born in      
Is making this offer to YOU.      
     
Line up for the ride of a lifetime,      
Be the envy of your neighborhood.      
Jesus, and you in the driver's seat,      
To witness it's always this good!      
     
     
     
April 4  ( NaPoWriMo 2017 )  
Written by Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
Published | Edited 28th Mar 2018
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