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Cream at the Top: DU's very best
*Before reading, the easily offended,
should now leave this page, as it may
cause many to rumble n rage...but
it's my opinion, my page*
I can be unashamedly honest
about my feelings concerning
critique of a writer's work...
Most, the pen with adept skill
n' I will admit many, I do feel...
Yet, when I feel as if my entire
being falls apart, adrift in some
otherworldly place lost to time
in some indefinable space...
There are many one can debate
Though on those here, a must
I relate my chosen case...
Yet, age may be nagging at memory
there a few DEFINITES, 'ink entities'
that always do this 'thing' to me....
Earth Child (Katja) , Undivided Praxis,
Ahavati, Naajir, n' Lyrical Temptation...
Obviously there are more, but these
are some poets that deeply inspire
me as I aspire to ascend the poet tree...
should now leave this page, as it may
cause many to rumble n rage...but
it's my opinion, my page*
I can be unashamedly honest
about my feelings concerning
critique of a writer's work...
Most, the pen with adept skill
n' I will admit many, I do feel...
Yet, when I feel as if my entire
being falls apart, adrift in some
otherworldly place lost to time
in some indefinable space...
There are many one can debate
Though on those here, a must
I relate my chosen case...
Yet, age may be nagging at memory
there a few DEFINITES, 'ink entities'
that always do this 'thing' to me....
Earth Child (Katja) , Undivided Praxis,
Ahavati, Naajir, n' Lyrical Temptation...
Obviously there are more, but these
are some poets that deeply inspire
me as I aspire to ascend the poet tree...
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Re. Cream at the Top: DU's very best
28th Mar 2017 2:18pm
Re: Re. Cream at the Top: DU's very best
28th Mar 2017 2:22pm
You deserve it n far more sweet lady. Can't recall anything I read that didn't leave completely amazed by your gift :)...n thank you for ur support :)
Re: Re. Cream at the Top: DU's very best
28th Mar 2017 2:31pm
Re. Cream at the Top: DU's very best
28th Mar 2017 2:36pm
AHHHHHHHHH!! SERIOUSLY?! i made the list! :D how awesome are you?!
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOUUUUU!! :D If i had a list to make you'd totally make it right at the friggin top! thaaaaank youuuu :D seriously this has made my day, my month, my year. I'm honoured! :D
much love, dear Poetik! Thank you again. (I'll stop now i swear)
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOUUUUU!! :D If i had a list to make you'd totally make it right at the friggin top! thaaaaank youuuu :D seriously this has made my day, my month, my year. I'm honoured! :D
much love, dear Poetik! Thank you again. (I'll stop now i swear)
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Re: Re. Cream at the Top: DU's very best
28th Mar 2017 2:49pm
So you're saying you didn't like? Lmao jk.... I'm honored you'd do that but hey I'm sure you'd make many top lists if anyone that knows anything about anything goes lol Thank u for ur support my dear :)
Re: Re. Cream at the Top: DU's very best
28th Mar 2017 3:02pm
I'd make the Top list of 'poets who suck at writing' perhaps ;) Thank you so much. Honoured, truly.
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Re. Cream at the Top: DU's very best
Anonymous
28th Mar 2017 2:39pm
A few pretty stellar writers you've listed here. I'll have to check the others out as well.
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Re: Re. Cream at the Top: DU's very best
28th Mar 2017 2:51pm
Thank you sweetness, obviously my list has U as well but I'm saving that for a next best piece :)
Re. Cream at the Top: DU's very best
Anonymous
28th Mar 2017 2:59pm
I am Deeeeeeply honored my brotha from anotha!!!!!!!....To be recognized by your poetic acumen definitely filled me with a special kinda joy this morning. .much respect to a '4 Horsemen' alumni...(remember that classic collab?)..
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Re: Re. Cream at the Top: DU's very best
28th Mar 2017 9:02pm
Gotta be real n give props to one of the best bro. N hell yea I remember that blazing ink!! Peace n love to you n yours kid...
Re. Cream at the Top: DU's very best
29th Mar 2017 9:40pm
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29th Mar 2017 11:01pm
Re. Cream at the Top: DU's very best
30th Mar 2017 4:31am
I know I'm a little late, I haven't been on here for about a week...but I luv you! So honored that you even mentioned me. You know that I love your work and it inspires me as well. If you didn't know...now you do. 😜💋💋💋
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Re: Re. Cream at the Top: DU's very best
30th Mar 2017 12:31pm
Aaaaawww you know I feel the same! N Yea There's no way I couldn't add you, I mean like who wouldn't?? :) happy you liked n thank you so much for all you are my sweetness :)
Re. Cream at the Top: DU's very best
30th Mar 2017 7:21am
Re: Re. Cream at the Top: DU's very best
30th Mar 2017 12:33pm
Gosh....u have me smiling big! Thank you sweetie, ur pretty special yourself... n thanks for ur support always :)
Re. Cream at the Top: DU's very best
Anonymous
30th Mar 2017 8:35pm
holy shit
i made the list
wooot
humbled Poe
truly
xo
a great ode to some fab writers around here
i made the list
wooot
humbled Poe
truly
xo
a great ode to some fab writers around here
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Re. Cream at the Top: DU's very best
30th Mar 2017 9:18pm
Lmao as if anyone would leave u off a list!
By now you must know your ink is Da Bomb.com woman!n if ya don't know now you know! lol thank u sweetness for all your support always :)
By now you must know your ink is Da Bomb.com woman!n if ya don't know now you know! lol thank u sweetness for all your support always :)
Re. Cream at the Top: DU's very best
31st Mar 2017 10:33am
Re: Re. Cream at the Top: DU's very best
31st Mar 2017 11:29am
So true my precious lady you are definitely ONE of them! Thank you so much for all your kindness n support :)