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Never, a Memory...
Promise me not
The moon nor star
for neither is
attainable from afar
Promise me no
sheath of protection
to cloak the blade
that pierces heart
Don't paint me
a picture within a few
or thousands words
dare not call me art
For it's far too distant
this realm, away, beyond
the body's 'ode' too feeble
as death creeps assuredly
closer, to a mind innately
forgotten...long gone.
Published 27th Mar 2017
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27th Mar 2017 10:33am
some things are better left unsaid... empty promises are definitely not what you are after. touche my friend! thanks for sharing!!
27th Mar 2017 1:27pm
Very true...thank you so much my sweet one as always I'm deeply grateful :)
27th Mar 2017 10:44am
Don't paint me
a picture within a few
or thousands words
dare not call me art
Fantastic words!
A genuine and emotional write. Thank you.
a picture within a few
or thousands words
dare not call me art
Fantastic words!
A genuine and emotional write. Thank you.
27th Mar 2017 1:35pm
27th Mar 2017 12:49pm
You gave me shivers with this one...
To me... words and promises mean nothing...
Thank you for sharing, dear!
To me... words and promises mean nothing...
Thank you for sharing, dear!
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27th Mar 2017 10:45pm
Sweet Lana... I'm grateful that you felt this truly appreciate your support always :)
Anonymous
27th Mar 2017 4:54pm
Make no promises you can't follow through on. Actions speak loudly enough. Great read!
27th Mar 2017 10:47pm
I try not to... can't speak for others though... Anywho, thank you my friend, your support means alot to me :)
28th Mar 2017 1:50am
There is a language of truth unspoken in the purest dialect of the known unknown. The only sound that exists is a muffled drumming of the heart.
This write contains that essence, Poetik One.
This write contains that essence, Poetik One.
28th Mar 2017 2:06am
WOW... is there anyway I can favorite ur comment!? lol...huge thanks, I'm wearing a big Ole look aid smile thanks to you! bless u :)
28th Mar 2017 2:20am
This was absolutely amazing baby!
This one is definitely goin in my RL even if I gotta bump some other poems outta it lol
Absolutely well done sweetie keep it up mmmmmmmuah! 💋❤️💋
This one is definitely goin in my RL even if I gotta bump some other poems outta it lol
Absolutely well done sweetie keep it up mmmmmmmuah! 💋❤️💋
28th Mar 2017 3:05am
Thank u pudding...just felt a need to spill dark lol...Anywho, I'm honored even if isn't add it to ur RL...:)
28th Mar 2017 6:24am
This is a beautiful piece. Wonderfully written. I find myself connecting to this piece a lot. Thanks for writing and sharing. I'm definitely adding this to my Reading List.
28th Mar 2017 10:13am
The amazing Eswaller! Wow...I'm honored n flattered for both the visit n the RL add! Thank you so much :)
Anonymous
28th Mar 2017 9:16am
the range and depth of your artistry
never ceases to amaze
never ceases to amaze
28th Mar 2017 10:15am
My Otha from anotha motha brotha!! Peace Naj. Know that for you I feel the same, n that I thank you greatly :)
28th Mar 2017 12:46pm
Not sure if I've commented on this one before but it's definitely my favourite I've read of yours. True skill in this ink.
28th Mar 2017 1:29pm
Thank you, I'm happy I finally posted one that had a hint of skill in it! I've Tryin so hard! lol...JK... thank u, honored :)
28th Mar 2017 2:44pm
it's got a tiny bit of skill ;) I jest, if words were a firework display, this would be the most wonderful to watch. Keep inking, my friend. You're damn good at what you do!
30th Mar 2017 4:01am
I've been reading through your work and this is one of my favorites. I like the feelings it provoked in me and the depth of your emotion. Great write..
30th Mar 2017 12:16pm
Well I do hope you find more than 1 enjoyable lol thank you so much for your thoughts n time. I appreciate it :)
Anonymous
25th May 2017 10:00am
Damn it, where are you from Iglape or Thepaoidi, lol
i mean that as in "Planets"
Can only hear my heart thudding inside me
i mean that as in "Planets"
Can only hear my heart thudding inside me
25th May 2017 10:24am
Aaaaawww...sweet precious...gosh, you have my heart thumping now! lol alas, I'm sorry to disappoint you but I'm from neither... I'm from Asgard, the world of the Gods!! Lol JK!! U really touched my heart sweetie, thank you so much, I appreciate that n you :)
